Comments For The Set Up
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 14, 2011 08:18 pm (Chapter 1)

AWW! Such a sweet story! Ok, first off I have to thank Joey for setting these two lovebirds up, kudos to Joey! :) JC has loved her all this time, *sigh* I like this line that he said though "I've got a good memory, especially when it comes to things that beautiful ladies like." He's so adorable, love the dancing, the dining, everything.. lolz and Joey "You can name the first bambino after me." HA! Thats Joey to ya..above all, great job! Loved it! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a great review!  I love Joey as the matchmaker.  I had fun with him, so I had to let him have a little cameo on the computer screen.  You just know when these two get married, he's going to take all the credit for hooking them up, even though they really fell in love long before he started meddling.  ;)

 




Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 14, 2011 10:16 am (Chapter 1)
I was reading this and the closer I got to the end the more I wanted to see a kiss. At first I didn't think one was in here until I read the end, so I was happy! Yay! The chapter wasn't wonky, don't worry. Anyway, i loved how Joey was involved. I could totally see him doing that. And the old couple was so cute! I enjoyed this very much.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I really wasn't sure where this story was going to take me, but I was pleased with how it worked out.  

The reason JC didn't kiss her earlier is that he didn't want to have a whole bunch of people watching them.  (Yeah, I wish I could read his mind!).  It was kind of fun to build up the suspence a bit too.  

And thanks for letting me know that it looked OK.  I had to change browsers to get it to post, then it timed out on me and I had to start again...it was quite a mess.  Probably I shouldn't have tried to post it when I was tired.  LOL.   






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