Comments For Never Over You
Keediluv (Signed) on May 30, 2011 10:35 am (Tomorrow)
So ya'll just had to go and rip the soul out of ol' boy huh? This is frustrating, confusing, yet strong, passionate and full of heart. I went around the world with my feelings on this one. I went from admiring her work to loathing her choice because her body or not, he deserved a vote. So, when are you two working together again because clearly, it works. AMAZING is what you two are seperate and together. Bravo!
Ki
SJane (Signed) on May 30, 2011 06:57 am (Tomorrow)
if ur goal was to bring tears to my eyes the mission accomplished beautiful writting. Immense passion and hurt but i shldnt expect anything less from i ladies... Be proud
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 01:37 am (Tomorrow)
After(halfway through) reading the 4th chapter, I kind of expected what was to come. I was still in shock when I read the words, but I loved the story. Itwas very well written.
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 01:17 am (Living)
Alright, with this chapter I'm hooked.
Mack (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 08:45 pm (Fate)
Hmm, I'm a little confused as to what she did because I have two different interpretations in my head but the feelings and emtions were amazing and brought the drama to life. I can't wait for the next one.
Mack (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 08:42 pm (Choices)
First off, I love their names. And I love that they're twins. Nothing beats the bond of a multiple, of which I know first-hand. It's great that they're there for each other. The miscarriage scene was so sad. As usual you ladies have a wonderful way with words.
Mack (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 08:38 pm (Living)
First I have to say I love the name Nyla, it's so unique. Oooh, very balls-y of Justin. I loved that part, it was different but it felt real, like something like that could really happen. I enjoyed this chapter very much.
Mack (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 08:34 pm (Purpose)
I have to say I loved this first chapter so much. I could feel every emotion he was feeling and see what he was seeing. You two (considering I don't know who wrote this part) have an amazing skill at bringing the readers in. I applaud you.
emme07 (Signed) on May 29, 2011 03:55 pm (Purpose)
I am so curious to see where this all goes! I should probably be getting more work done and not checking every so often to see if there is another update but, oh well :)
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 29, 2011 09:03 am (Purpose)
That was beautifully written, ladies :) I loved it. It was so haunting and raw...incredible! Wonderful work.
