Comments For A Closer Look
Bouncerok (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 01:04 pm (Epilogue)
great story is there going to be more is he really going to ask her you have to let me know
SJane (Signed) on Jan 03, 2008 02:43 am (Epilogue)
man 70 chapters now thats comitment right there lol. Your writting had me holding on for another and another chapter so it definatley held me there, great job
JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 07:20 am (Epilogue)
Aww damn that was good. U should make a part 2 to this story.
