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theusagirl (Signed) on May 05, 2012 09:01 pm (Chapter 12)

Yes thats me! You can call me Steph.. :) Ok, ok, I love what JC told her about that Desiree is a natural, kind, and loving girl. And not like those fake superficial chicks..LOL Eww..

And JC got mad for a bit because she thought that he didn't understand, aww..though angry JC is hott, ;) So glad though that they both talked about it and things are easing up b/tween them. Now Dez, go to LA with him.. :) I know I would..lolz

By the way, thanks for the update. :D Nicely done..I didn't think it was boring. *grins*




theusagirl (Signed) on May 01, 2012 09:06 pm (Chapter 11)

Hmm..what happened to her?? Why did she get sick all of sudden?? Maybe breakfast would help..I like how JC was all concerned about her and everything..aww.

Nicely done, its been a while yes. But thanks for all of the updates. Hope all is well.. :)




theusagirl (Signed) on May 01, 2012 08:59 pm (Chapter 10)

I love his laugh, and everything else about the man.

Lolz the fact that things we getting heated between the two of them, but she stopped him before going any further..tee hee.

And yes, a Christmas tree for Christmas is a must, I love that. :)

Nicely done.. ;)




theusagirl (Signed) on May 01, 2012 08:42 pm (Chapter 9)

Aww..I love that there relationship is getting better, and the fact that JC bought a house for the both of them..thats so nice. :)

Its been a while since you updated, thanks though. I'm liking it so far..




theusagirl (Signed) on May 01, 2012 08:33 pm (Chapter 7)

He sent her roses?? *gushes* AWW! JC, send me tulips, I love tulips..lolz

And the way she explained her feelings to him, yeah that's how I feel about him as well, these lines here: the more she pushed him away, the more he wanted her." Yep, that can be true, the love grows stronger..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 01, 2012 08:23 pm (Chapter 6)

I'll be his friend.. ;) Well, I'll probably be more than just his friend...tee hee.

Mel didn't know who JC was, and when Dez told her, she freaked..LOL




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2012 07:26 pm (Chapter 8)

I remembered this story, I just had to refresh my memory a bit..lolz Ahh! I have to keep reading this when I get the chance. :D



Author's Response: yes, I fell off for a while, I'm trying to get back on track..at the moment I got nothing, lol...I'm waiting for some inspiration



champ (Signed) on Jan 13, 2012 10:58 pm (Chapter 7)

AWW COME ON JUST ONE CHAPTER?! lol

 



Author's Response: Lol, yeah sorry..I'm trying to get it out as fast as I canm I'm working on the next chapter now..I'm trying to make the chapters a little bit longer too...soo, bear with me! lol..



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 25, 2011 08:24 pm (Chapter 5)

lolz Its okay..

I like how JC texted her back, ooh he'll see her later, uh huh.. ;)




theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 23, 2011 02:34 pm (Chapter3)

Hahahaha..she blushed. Gosh JC you notice everything don't ya...lolz. I had to refresh my memory for a bit, cause I forgot about this story..lolz

Ok first off, I hope everything else is going okay for you and your frds, family. *hug* And yes the holidays are just around the corner, so have a wonderful Thanksgiving. :D




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 09:02 pm (Chapter 2)
Ok JC my number is... :P Tee hee.. He would probably say that I have pretty eyes too..(mine are hazel..lolz) I like this, its real cute, I like how Desiree tells him that JC can outsing Justin ANY day..Im sorry Justin but its true.. dont get mad at me..lolz Anywho..nice job... ;) Thanks for the update..

Author's Response:

haha...seriously in real life my eyes are almost the exact color of The Cullens in twilight, most of the time...they change though...which, is basically Hazel, but my friends actually refer to them as twilight eyes..and heck yeah, JC can blow Justin outta the water and I'm not just saying that because JC is melted and and poured sexiness, Its because its true, not tha Justin doesn't have his I wanna abduct you moments lol...anyway, I'm trying to crank this story out as quick as I can, this however is a busy time of year for me, and my creative flow is being pulled in so many directions its insane...but I'm glad u like it

 




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 11, 2011 07:39 pm (Chapter 1)
Oooh not bad..hmm..maybe it was a bad day..I actually like this so far.. :)

Author's Response: thanks, I'm actually sitting here right now trying to write Chapter 2..



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2011 01:22 pm (Prologue)
Intriguing...Ok first off, Hi! Welcome to the world of *NSYNC fiction your gonna like it here.. ;) Now, I like the way you started this, not a bad intro..

Author's Response: h thanx! Sorry...I been sitting here for an hour trying to get a first Chapter out and no matter what  I write I just end up deleting it...I'm tryin ;)



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 08, 2011 10:48 pm (Prologue)
You should make this the synopsis and create a longer version of the prologue. It seems interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm kinda new and tryin t get the hang of this..I have written other fiction just not ever been read.aside from the whole fan fic thing





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