Comments For Browner
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 18, 2011 12:37 am (Paper Airplanes)
I want to punch that girl. She's horrible to them. Good job browner, leave her for being a slut. I love it.


PopDiva (Signed) on Aug 17, 2011 01:17 am (Paper Airplanes)

I liked this.  I wasn't sure what to expect after reading the intro, but I think I liked not knowing and watching the story unfold that way.  

I could feel Charlie's pain, and I liked his redemption at the end, doing what is right for him.   



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 16, 2011 12:09 pm (Paper Airplanes)
Wow oh wow.. I actually liked this, you know I actually know a Charlie, who has this sort of job as a law firm..lolz But this line here "Underneath it all we're just kids, with big dreams and a stubborn heart. Interesting.... ;) Oh and I laughed at the Charlie Brown comment..

Author's Response:

I love that line. And it's so true ( at least from my point of view )

Thank you :)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 09:01 am (Paper Airplanes)

I loved this POV. It was like JC was an innocent bystander in this love triangle. I was pleased with Charlie's decision on handling the situation; it definitely redeemed him for his douchey cheating. And, the airport scene? Classic. Heartbreaking, but I was fist-pumping for Browner in the background.

Great job, madame!



Author's Response:

Thanks love. The area of it being Charlie's POV was something that just popped into my head and I ran with it.

 

Btw, You totally reviewed at 9:01! Which only means one thing.... TEQUILA TIME!!



MissM (Signed) on Aug 16, 2011 07:57 am (Paper Airplanes)

 "Does JC know you're here? Did you tell him that you were going to chase me down to the airport to stop me? Did you tell him that we've slept together? Hell, did you call off your engagement?" 

 

Totally sat at my desk trying not to yell THAT!  THAT! THAT! ugh. NEITHER of them deserve HER.

Awesome entry!  



Author's Response:

I love that Charlie, even as much as he thought he 'loved' her said, HELL NO. Haha! He is in the wrong, but he made the right choice!

Thanks love :)





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