Comments For His Baby Girl
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 07, 2011 10:39 pm (Chapter 5)
Wow, another update already? You're spoiling me! You're right, this chapter was a real tear jerker. It's horrible that Val's parents kicked her out. I feel so bad for JC and Dana. I can't believe that Val just stopped loving JC like that, and that she would abandon her own daughter. The line where JC said; "as soon you were born she would move out without you." Has to hurt. Then there was this part; "I swore I would never hurt you, I would do anything to keep you safe, and I would love you more than life itself." This was the part that brought tears to my eyes. I do think that it was best that JC gave Dana to Ted and Jo, so that she could have both a mother and a father, and be raised in a stable environment.

Author's Response: I completely agree. It makes no sense as to why she stopped loving him. I'm glad you are loving this. I think that this story is going to be a long one. Which I'm sure you will love.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 07:51 pm (Chapter 5)
*tear :( Oh that was such a sad chapter, man Val's parents kicked her out? Jeez..that's terrible..this line here "I swore I would never hurt you, I would do anything to keep you safe, and I would love you more than life itself." That is soo touching..thanks for the update..

Author's Response: Aww thank you. I was about to cry writing that. Im glad you loved it.





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