Comments For His Baby Girl
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2012 08:23 pm (Chapter 8)

"What are the rumors about that kid? If he said she was a slut he is going to know the size of my shoe in his groin." lolz.

Now, I think Dana should go to LA with JC, that'll be fun, that way she can away from that slimeball Brent..hmph. But I'm glad that she told Ted and JC.. so that was good.

Good chapter..thanks for the updates. :)



Author's Response: I wanted to make waiting for her telling her parents about Brent, but my brain wouldnt cooperate oh well at least it turned out good. I stll think it needs some tweaking.



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 20, 2012 04:23 pm (Chapter 8)

Whoa! I can't wait to see what happens when Dana moves to L.A. with JC!
P.S.

I still have my fingers crossed that Brent will somehow get his ass kicked! 



Author's Response: I know I want to know how Dana will deal with JC's LA life. Im gonna work on it. :D



kb4jc (Signed) on Jan 20, 2012 12:39 am (Chapter 8)
wow...this story just gets better and better...i lovw how jc is being so protective of his child and dam that kid to hell...i want my shoe to meet his groin. 

Author's Response: I totally agree. This kid deserves to get kicked. I loved your comment. thanks for the review.





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