Comments For One Night
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 24, 2011 04:24 pm (Chapter 3)
Phew! It's a great start, and I love baby stories :) but I was really difficult to follow. Spacing and punctuation would really help the flow of this, and people would be able to follow along much easier. If you need help, don't hesitate to ask! Welcome to the site!
Ashlyn (Anonymous) on Aug 24, 2011 10:24 am (Chapter 3)
You should def. keep this story going bc I'd love to see what happens. Great story sooo far!!! :-)
