great story....tears are in my eyes...it was soooo good

This was very good. Different from other stuff I've read before. The whole "flashback" stuff was what got me hooked and on the first chapter wanting to know what she had. I don't even know what else to say, I just really enjoyed it. :)

YAY! He's gonna ask her out, way to go JC I'm so proud of you, come here, let me give u a hug..lolz That was good story, I like this line here "Your kid is hanging with guys more 7 times his age who still act like four year olds." I agree on that, hahah.. and it was funny that Justin was staring at the wedding photo while JC was playing the song..lolz Typical...and that was a good heart to heart talk that Justin and JC had as well..I liked that.. :)

Nice story! I actually had to chuckle a bit at the part where his dream/flashback was cut off by Ian just when Jess was about to say what was wrong with her on the first chapter. Sounds very much like something I would do if I were writing a similar scene. lol. Anyway. I couldn't blame him for missing Jess that much especially since they've been together for that long. And I also feel for him regarding the unsuccessful surgery. It's very painful getting your hopes up only to find out that your chance for a better life ended up speeding up the way to that unwanted road. Geez, I'm getting talkative, aren't I? So I'll stop here now. Haha. It's nice that he's trying to move on though. Good job. :)