Comments For Long Lost Sister
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 11:34 am (Chapter 14)
Aww this was a nice chapter :)) Haha 'Don't diss the Benz' :P Hey, I'm honestly one of those people who have no sense of direction. I'm really quite hopeless, ask anyone. But moving on... Oh JC... He really hasn't let the fame get to his head. He seems like that kind of person who's knows he's fortunate for what he's got and is thankful for it.  He's so sweet ;) That really was a good evening. Ohh I still have 4 chapters to read! *excitement*

Author's Response: I laughed at the line when I wrote it.. I sometimes don't know where I'm going either, so I have to stop and ask..LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing.. :D



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 11:24 am (Chapter 13)
"I'm going to the kitchen to-ohhh"  that was funny line :)) Made me laugh. Again, I think it's really nice the great relationship Tiff and Agatha has. Even though she's her adoptive mother, she's still her mother and it's a great relationship. No Tiff, you're not an only child! :)) Your brother is Joshie Chasez. Okay I really need to stop now. I mean JC Chasez :D I can't wait to see what happens at dinner!

Author's Response: LMAO! I'm glad your enjoying the story so far! YEA aww Joshie Chasez.. Tee hee, that sounds so adorable..Thanks for all the reviews! Its's appreciated.



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 10:37 am (Chapter 12)
Eeeee!! This chapter made me laugh and smile, literally!! :)) I loved it! I love the talks they had at the beginning. That was really sweet that they were kind of bonding and laughing together. Ohh now I see why he could never had contacted her earlier. :( Place burned down. Clever reason ;) I liked that! Haha and I laughed when she called him 'Joshie'... hahaha and again when she told him 'Bye Bye Bye'... :P This is gonna be a great year ;) Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! *hugs* Yeah it burned down, so sad. And I had to put that "Bye Bye Bye" verse in there, we all know JC loves it..lolz Thanks for the review.. :)



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 10:28 am (Chapter 11)
This chapter made me sad! Ahh When JC had to tell her that he knew all along and she got a little mad, I felt bad for them! And then when JC cried... :( Ahh... But then that song... Great lyrics. I'm glad that now they both know :D And they hugged! Aww... Good drama, but I think when they made up and when she first confronted him about it was a little too 'easy'... Just my opinion. But it's getting good ;) I wanna see what happens now! :D *next chap

Author's Response: Im glad you like the song I chose, yeah JC cried, he can be so vulnerable at times, you have to make him a cry a little bit, it makes us love him even more.. :) Tee hee..



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 10:13 am (Chapter 10)
When I read the Author Note and saw that you wrote that this would be a sad chapter, I was like 'Oh man, she's gonna make me sad, isn't she?'... LOL She remembers!! She knows now!! :O GO TO JC'S HOUSE. NOW! *but i'll go to the next chapter :D



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 10, 2011 10:03 am (Chapter 9)
UGH! Who cares about Mario Lopez's shirt if you can get to touch JC's shirt?! haha :P Ohh She has his wallet! Damn... And she saw the photo! :O Don't leave cliffhangers like that!! AH! Okay, next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Yes she did! She saw the photo! hahahaha! Thanks for reading and reviewing.. :)



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 09, 2011 11:26 pm (Chapter 7)
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 09, 2011 02:57 pm (Chapter 18)
I love that they sing along to Bon Jovi. I love living on a prayer. Can't wait to see what happens in DC.

Author's Response:

Bon Jovi is awesome.. lolz! Thanks for the review..I'm glad you like it. :)




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 09, 2011 01:50 pm (Chapter 6)
Let's see... Tiffani was adopted, and is from Maryland, JC was adopted and is from Maryland. He has blue eys, Tiffani has blue eyes. Tiffani felt a special connection with JC. JC felt a special connection with Tiffani. C'mon Tiff, how are you not connecting the dots!!!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 09, 2011 01:46 pm (Chapter 5)
Uggh! JC! How can you not say anything! I can't take this! LOL!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 09, 2011 12:33 am (Chapter 4)
Great, now I wanna eat pizza from Pizza Hut! LOL! This was a great chapter! I loved the part about Edward not drinking Pepsi, because it made him talk too much! I love this story!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 08, 2011 09:30 pm (Chapter 3)
Yeah, I think I needed some Kleenex! This chapter was so sad. To just rip a mother away from her children is so horrible. Yeah JC, you go get your sister back! 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 08, 2011 07:19 pm (Chapter 2)
Tiffani is adopted, and so is JC, and Tiffani said that she felt like she had known JC before. Hmmm.... I think I know where this is going! Anyway, Yay! We fiannly get to meet her crew, I like the name Moonlight Shadow!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D Yeah its actually the name of techno song..lolz Thank you for reading and reviewing, Im glad you like it! :)



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 07, 2011 06:33 pm (Chapter 15)
Can I just say, the song celebrity popped into my head when Janet described JC and his girl's argument. I can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Yep yep yep, that was my idea "I thought you were gonna get those diamond earrings JC!" "Hey wait a minute, do you want me or do you want what I can buy you?" I WANT YOU JC! Ok..sorry about that.. lolz But anywho, thanks for reviewing.. *hugs* Im glad you like it.



JSC_OutOfSync (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 11:08 am (Chapter 8)
haha omg Mario Kart! Ahh I lived off of that game when I was a kid. :D Anyways... Ahh JC hugged Eliza.. I so wish I was her. Working for him and going for ice cream with him. Mmm :)) Anyways... I like it! Ah I'm in school and I though i'd be able to read them alll but now I got to go. Looking forward to reading the rest when I get a free hour later! :D

Author's Response: Yea it's like the best game EVER, well Mario Party comes a close second..lolz. And yes Eliza is soo lucky to work for him..I would love that too, *sigh*  And you read and review when you can..Thankies! *hugs*





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