Comments For Long Lost Sister
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 06, 2011 03:34 pm (Chapter 13)
I love agatha. She reminds me of me.

Author's Response: lolz! Thanks for the review.. :)



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 05, 2011 04:00 pm (Chapter 11)
Aw *grabs tissue* that was great. I love the part where JC was like "you felt that too?" I can't wait til the next chapter.

Author's Response: I just updated the next chapter.. *does happy dance*



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 03, 2011 07:32 pm (Chapter 9)
Oh my goodness you can not just end it there. Update soon. I love this.



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 03, 2011 04:17 pm (Chapter 8)
Hehe I love when tiff gets excited that she won. JC knows, Yay. Update soon please.



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 02, 2011 11:21 pm (Chapter 7)
This is good.. haha God, JC seriously either needs to hire a chef or learn to make himself a proper meal that isnt PB&J sandwiches! haha Okay, the introductions on everything is good, but I'm ready for things to get juicy so we can get some drama in ;) hehe Waiting on the upcoming chap! Update soon! :))

Author's Response: hahahaha...the drama stuff will be up soon..hopefully.. I think. lolz I know right? JC needs to a chef or something, I told him to get one but he wouldn't listen.. LOL!



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 02, 2011 11:19 pm (Chapter 6)
This was sweet. I like their relationship and I laughed at the part where her mom said that Max was in the rose bushes because maybe he wanted to give some roses to the French poodle. hehe  *next chapter*



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 02, 2011 04:50 pm (Chapter 6)
Oh man, I hope jc connects the dots and tells tiff about it.



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Sep 02, 2011 12:23 am (Chapter 5)
Ahhh the suspense is killing me. Update ASAP. I love it. *hug*



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 01, 2011 06:49 pm (Chapter 5)
Oh, you never know who you'll meet at a gas station that's for sure. I love that she got a little starstruck when they collided. hehe I'm liking this! Thanks much for updating and please give another update soon! I need to know what's going to happen with these two! I mean, he already knows but I want to see what happens when he tells her or when she figures it out. Ah! More please :))



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Sep 01, 2011 06:35 pm (Chapter 4)
I smiled at the playfulness between Brian and Edward at the table in Pizza Hut when they ere talking about the waitress. And he did give her his number! ahaha! Mmm now i feel for Pizza Hut. Cinnamon breadsticks and pizza sounds good right about now. I wonder if anything interesting is going to happen at the gas station. ;) This is good. *goes to next chapter*



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 31, 2011 11:10 pm (Chapter 3)
I loved this chapter!! Thanks so much for updating!! Okay, the first line in this story: "Oh my God, he is SO hot!" I actually said "Yes he is!" out loud to my computer. haha That flashback, and JC standing there in the parking lot thinking back about it, made me feel so sad. That flashback made me tear up! I almost freakin cried! I love that Josh was the strong one for his sister even though he was breaking inside. And about his mom, I feel so bad for her about her husband leaving her and then being taken away from her kids and then I feel bad for Josh that he had to endure all that. Ahh JC please go meet your sister! I hope she remembers you. Update again soon! :D This is great!

Author's Response: Im glad you loved this chapter! AHHH! Yeah when I wrote that flashback, I almost cried too.. :( It was so sad..Thanks for the review.. :)



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 31, 2011 10:52 pm (Chapter 2)
Ohh I love the mother-daughter relationship between Tiffani and her mom. It's sweet. And she's adopted! :O Cool :) This was a filler, sort of, but I like it. Thanks for introducing her crew to us. 'Moonlight Shadow', hmm. I like it ;) Haha and I love the humor with 'Edward' and them calling him 'Edwin'. Idk, I just find it funny. Haha My only note for you (God that sounds like something JC would say on ABDC) would be to separate the dialogues. When one person says one thing, let the other person's response be on the next line. I think it's easier to read that way. And try not to overuse the 'He said' and 'She said'. But other than that, i'm enjoying reading!! :D I'm eager to see what's going to go down with her and her crew. *off to read the next chapter* :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the tip! :D Yeah I was working on that, I had a bit of trouble fixing this chapter, I think MS Word was hating me..LOL! I'll try to keep the dialogues separated..I'll probably have Chapter 4 up later or something.. :) Thanks for the reviews.. *hugs*



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 31, 2011 06:01 pm (Chapter 2)
Oh I can't wait til the next chapter. Moonlight Shadow? Tee hehe I giggled while reading that.

Author's Response:

Yeah thats actually a techno song..lolz Just to let you know, next chapter is up.. :)




JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 04:01 pm (Chapter 1)
Ohh I'm liking it!! And I lovee the that he called her 'honey'.. *giggles* Loz I'm really looking forward to where you take this story :D Haha Tiff, you came to dance, not be fascinated by his good looks.. I beg to differ. If i had to go up there and dance in front of JC, i'd prob pass out and just hope he'd be the one to come ask me if I was okay.. okay okay i've gone off topic. But i'm liking this so update soon! :))

Author's Response: Im glad your liking it! :D I would pass out too..f I had to dance in front of him, maybe Idk..LOL!  But Tiffani needs to put her brave face on..haha..



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 03:25 pm (Chapter 1)

Loved this! Can't wait for more, update soon! 

One question though: Where's her crew? 



Author's Response: You know what? I forgot all about her crew, I was only focusing on her, LOL! I think I was confusing myself with "American Idol" But her crew will arrive in the next chapter, hopefully. I guess they were judged on how they dance individually then the crew.. :)





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