Hmm..what did Chris wanted to say??
Bur OMG! I LOVE THE BEACH SCENE! Ok, I'm sorry for shouting, it was really..HAWT and naughty.. That whole section of JC and Zahra doing more than just "talkin" totally makes up for it. GUH! I mean, JC, at the beach, at night?? Looking like that?? Heck yes..I'll be like, "Come here you, lay it on me."
Ok, let me stop..lolz
Now, on to Justin, looks like he wants to be intimate with her, but it looks like he and Zahra don't have that extra "oomph" that she and JC have...hmm. And I find it interesting that she wanted to give JC some "space" between them, but the passionate love-making totally makes up for that "space" ;)
Thank you for updating, and yay! You are on a break..for now. So update when you can.. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I mean even in imagination, I don't think anyone would turn "Bahamas JC" away....lol.
It does seem that he wants something with her and maybe you're onto something in there not being that extra "oomph", but Zahra seems to know what she's doing. Me as a writer and you as a reader just have to trust in her decision and see where it takes her.
Thanks for the review, just a week and a half left before I'm have that much needed break!
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