Comments For Supremacy System
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 09, 2011 09:01 pm (Chapter 11: Fifteen Minutes in Hell)

Well, if I had to "rent" an *NSYNC guy for the night, I'll choose JC and Chris. I would be really nice to them, and of course I would kiss them, I'll kiss JC more. ;) And for Chris, a really good friend, I don't have the heart to take advantage of them.

Now, as for the story, the "15 Minutes of Heaven" was rather interesting, but being a cage and having all those crazy girls over them, thats just nuts. And looks like Isadora is agreeing with Lexi's plan..hmm.

Nice job. Thanks for the update..




Megan (Anonymous) on Dec 09, 2011 12:58 am (Chapter 11: Fifteen Minutes in Hell)

I love this story! It is just so different from any other story out there and thats kinda awesome :). It is hard to read how sick the guys are and just being absolutely tortured by this new promotion crap. I hope that Isadora will pull through and buy the guys and let Lexi work with them.

On a side note, if I could rent a guy I would probably rent either JC or Lance. I think just spending time with JC would be nice and enjoyable and Lance would be awesome to have a great deep conversation with. Probably give JC and kiss or two ;).



Author's Response:

Thanks as much as I would love to say that it's a completely orginal idea, i did get parts of it from Anime Cartoons that I have seen - the names of which I can't recall at the moment.  In those the roles are usually switched so I guess I did make modifications.  :)  But those cartoons have some pretty odd story lines. 

I have made myself cringe a few times while writing, it's bad and I can't tell you where I come up with some of this stuff.  It just kind of hits me, Jade is pure evil and I to think that there are people like her in the world that would absolutly do this stuff. But I have put them through everything for a reason, it will get better.

I am actually a few chapters a head (i like to re-read them a few times before I post) and it's where Isadora comes to save them, I just wanted to make sure that her actions where realistic with how a REAL FAN would act.




creativechaos (Signed) on Dec 08, 2011 11:04 pm (Chapter 11: Fifteen Minutes in Hell)

I'd also rent all of them just to get them away from the hell they're in - give them a nice warm bed and a good meal. I'd rent them for as many nights as I could afford. If I was broke and had to choose - either JC or Lance. Lance because he's my favorite, and of course I wouldn't take advantage of him, I'd much rather stay up all night and have a wonderful conversation with him. I'd probably beg him to give me one kiss, just so I could say that I had gotten that in my life lol. I'd actually be more tempted to rent JC though - because he's sick, and he really needs someone to take care of him. That's such a hard choice though because they're ALL sick and need someone to take care of them!

I've been reading every chapter - I'm absolutely 100% hooked. Thanks for your quick updates, this is awesome! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am glad you like it.  I know it can be 'dark' at times.  I was worried that people wouldn't like it becuase it is a little odd and dark, but I love it.  I re-read it a lot, if it is possible to be addicted to your own story then I am.

 

As for JC just to calrify what is wrong with him - as any one who has had too much to drink can atest it takes a toll on your stomach. Especially if you drink on an empty stomach.  In throey all the guys would be suffering from this but JC is the only one who is admitting to having it.






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