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musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Oct 28, 2011 10:54 am (Chapter 5)
Aww JC better be in a better state of mind after all this. Not only that he better be nice to Lisa from now on. If not grr he's a big bully.

Author's Response: You would think he could see the treasure in front of him, but he never learns! Thanks for reading!



grishy (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2011 03:06 pm (Chapter 5)

Impressed indeed, and thankgull to read more about this two.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!  More will be coming soon...



Megan (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2011 02:38 pm (Chapter 5)
YAY!!!! 2 chapters in one day :). Loved these past 2 chapters, really glad that JC is doing better and that he stopped treating Lisa like shit. So sweet to see Lisa washing his hands for him and LOL at her having to help him go to the bathroom ;). Can't wait for another chapter, LOVE this story!

Author's Response: I know - I finally got some uninterrupted time!  Thanks!  I think that is one of my favorite scenes!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2011 01:36 pm (Chapter 5)

Woo hoo two chapters! :D And these couple of lines here " It was the reason that she turned her back – so she wouldn’t have to look into those sad blue eyes. You know the ones that you took one look at and would do anything to make them happy again. 

Yes THAT look. :( I feel bad for JC, though he has Lisa there to help him, aww she brought him to the bathroom,  and I laughed when JC told her not to look when he was doing his business. Too cute. Nice job, and thanks for the the double updates. :)



Author's Response: So you know that look too!!  And I enjoyed writing that, it was fun!





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