Comments For Dodge Ball
theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 18, 2011 08:53 pm (Chapter 1)

These lines here "Oi! What the fuck was that for?” JC turns around and glares at Chris, who is conveniently looking the other way. “Kirkpatrick did you not hear me?”

What? Sorry Jayce did you say something?” Chris asks innocently, and Justin laughs from the other side of the field. LMAO!

Well this was a fun read, Justin broke JC's glass doors and he is overreacting..hahah..too cute. I must say this though "Dogpile!" That is how I described the guys fighting and tackling eachother..tee hee.

And lolz JC gets angry when he hasn't beem fed.. :P Pretty cute story. :)



Author's Response: thanks :) i wrote it a while ago. I am glad you liked it...





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