Very different plot, but I liked it.  Love how you tied in Chris' fear of heights - very clever! 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. :)

I gotta say, this story was pretty creative and I liked that the main character was Chris. Okay, hazelcream pomegranate pepper potion?! haha Chris, why did you even ask? Wow. LOL And her parents are there now! That's sweet. LOL At the 'Teabag' nickname. Okay, just a little piece of my opinion. Work on the your uses of the quotation marks and other punctuation marks. I noticed some grammatical errors here and there. Cute friendship they developed. It was good!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you read, reviewed, and liked the story. :D My Secret Santa Bastet_Baby hasn't read it yet, so this is what she wanted as her prompt, hopefully she'll read it soon. Anyway, thanks for your advice, yeah I sometimes forget the quotation marks and stuff..lolz but overall, I'm glad you enjoyed it, this was something different, and it was fun to write about. :)