Comments For Take It Back
MochaB (Signed) on Jan 02, 2012 07:31 pm (Take It Back)
LOL Scavegina. Anyway this was a funny little short. Shelby was quite the character. I enjoyed her...and the smut.  Lol 

Author's Response: Thanks! It was interesting to write her. Like the prompt asked for a snappy, strong female which I have written before but when you're consiously trying to make her that way it's a bit more of a challenge. Thanks for reading!



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 31, 2011 01:55 pm (Take It Back)

This was cute :)

And...I'm dying laughing from "Scavengina"...genius title! 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm telling you I was *thisclose* to actually naming it that because I could NOT think of a title for the life of me haha. Thanks for reading!



emme07 (Signed) on Dec 25, 2011 03:22 pm (Take It Back)

Whenever I see you post a story I get so happy!! This was fantastic, hope to hear more from you soon :)



Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad it could bring you some happy! Thanks for reading!



Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2011 11:08 pm (Take It Back)
That was HILARIOUS!  I love your characterization of Justin - just the right mix of ego and sensitivity at the same time.  The briefs being in the nightstand the whole time was the perfect mischevious ending.  Great job, girl!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I was worried it was kinda hokey but I'm glad you found it as funny as I did haha. Thanks for reading!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Dec 21, 2011 04:30 pm (Take It Back)

First of all, let me say that I was EXSTATIC when I saw that you were the one to write my story.  That was treat enough.

But then I read it!  Fan-fucking-tastic!  I loved it!  I love the banter, the scavenger hunt theme (especially stealing the boxers, hilarious!) and I couldn't have asked for a better Santa gift!  Thank you, thank you a thousand times over! 



Author's Response: GUH YAY I am SO glad you liked it!!! Writer's block was a killer this year and I was lucky to have such a good prompt to work with. Thanks for reading and you're welcome!!!



MissM (Signed) on Dec 21, 2011 04:58 am (Take It Back)

“What! I’m talented, good looking, smart,” he paused and added somewhat reluctantly, “wealthy, famous…” he waved a hand as if his tone of voice weren’t enough to suggest that these last two were frivolous.

That line cracked me up, for some reason! See, it turned out fine! And thank you for giving the man his briefs back.  



Author's Response: IT WAS HARD *grumble grumble* haha I'm such a whiner. That's one of my favorite lines too! Thanks for all your support through the whole writing process! And thanks for reading!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Dec 20, 2011 10:22 pm (Take It Back)

Great story. Always look foward to your stories. Hopefully you have more time to write more... :) Another hit!

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy my writing. I've got some stuff in the works I just need to discipline to get it all out and on paper. Hopefully it'll be up soonish. Thanks for reading!



creativechaos (Signed) on Dec 20, 2011 10:17 pm (Take It Back)

The word "assbutt" made me laugh uncontrollably. So did the story, I have tears rolling right now. And as funny as it was, it was amazing and hot too. If I leave laundry laying out, my other half just sits on it.

Oh well. This was amazing, I loved your female character. I got a kick that she went right back to giving him a hard time at the end. You did such a great job. 



Author's Response: HAHA YES Assbutt is my new favorite insult. It's from the TV show Supernatural (watch it). Anyway! I'm glad you liked the story! Thanks for reading and leaving me a review!



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Dec 20, 2011 09:37 pm (Take It Back)
That was pure hotness.  You're such an awesome writer and I don't usually read visuals but this was the exception! Awesome Job! You have a great chemistry with the characters you write!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really struggled with this one for some reason so it's good to know it's not terrible haha. Thanks for reading!!!





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