Comments For Cabin Fever
DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Jul 17, 2012 02:54 pm (Chapter 1)

“We know where you guys are if Chris dies of old age,” Justin added. “I raise two cents.” He tossed two pennies into the pot at the center.

“Or if J suffocates in his sleep,” Chris joked. He tossed two more pennies into the pot. “I call.”

and this line

“Yeah, I can see the headlines now. 'Not So 'N Sync: Boy Band Found Frozen at Ski Resort'.”

Where do you come up with this stuff?? I laughed so hard I was crying.  wonderful!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Not sure where it comes up, I just throw myself into the story and let them be themselves. :)

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!




theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 10, 2012 08:00 pm (Chapter 1)
Awww..what a cute and fun story. :) I really liked it. I laughed so hard at these lines here: At least my breath doesn't smell like dog butt,” Chris replied, shoving the younger man off him.

“You'd know the smell,” Justin grumbled as they got up.

“What's that?” Chris put a hand up to his ear like he was deaf.

LMAO! Gotta love Chris and Justin's banter..

And even though they were snowed in, they made the most of it. :) Good job.



Author's Response: Thank you! I had quite a good time writing this one. There was so many ideas I didn't know which way to go at times, but I'm happy with how it ended.





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