Comments For Tick; Tick.
kasia87 (Signed) on Jan 30, 2012 12:10 am (Like a ticking bomb...)

woah. this was so good. and at the end i was almost a little shocked. Totally made my mind think at the possibilities with this. 

SO GOOD> 




Anonymous (Signed) on Jan 13, 2012 02:15 pm (Like a ticking bomb...)
Very interesting idea!

Author's Response: thanks so much!



SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Jan 13, 2012 11:33 am (Like a ticking bomb...)
GAWD this was so good!!! And you're right shorts are hard. Cramming info and emotion into a tiny word count is tricky but you did it so well with this! I love the whole premise really. And pardon me while I fangirl flail but... IS HE DEAD?? DID SHE KILL HIM??? LAWD GOD MAH BB. *ahem* Great work!

Author's Response: ahahahahahaha! the end is really up to the reader to decide... maybe she killed him, maybe she just knocked him out so that she could make a getaway; maybe she knows him, maybe she doesnt... anyway, thanks so much for reading & reviewing! everytime i think that no one really cares about my work you come and leave a review and make it all better, so thanks :) i think what i was trying to portray was a robbery being held by someone who's full of remorse and fear, and is therefore kind of incapable of pulling it off well... and if you liked it then i guess i did that right, lol. thanks so much again!! & hey when are you gonna post something??? i miss your work :(





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