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theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 10, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 5)
Author's Response: She's still sick, but she's feeling a little better. I'm sure she'll feel much better once they figure out what's wrong with her. :) Thank you!
Wow..this was a good chapter. Ok, first off, I hope your beta reader is doing okay, *hugs* and thats also nice that your husband is helping you out reading this. :)
In this chapter, it looks like Lance feels that the day in the cell is dragging by oh so slowly, and I like that Damien was explaing his side of the story.
Nicely done..
Author's Response: She's still sick, but she's feeling a little better. I'm sure she'll feel much better once they figure out what's wrong with her. :) Thank you!