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mollyanna5 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2012 01:47 am (Chapter 9)
I am enjoying the Lance/Abby connection :) thanks for updating!

Author's Response: And they're just getting started! ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 14, 2012 10:33 pm (Chapter 8)

Ooooooh! *scoff* I don't she's sorry at all! That little freak! I wanna just take her and put her in a box somewhere floating down the river..lolz...

Yeah Lance gave her everything she ever wanted, and I don't think that wedding she would have with Jason won't last long, unless I'm wrong..hmm..

This was a good chapter, thanks for the updates..



Author's Response: LOL your review made me giggle beyond belief! Thank you!



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 13, 2012 09:47 pm (Chapter 7)

Brayden?? *gasp*

Ok, I laughed at these lines here: "But still. My answer is completely different for each of you – like Lance, if I was in here with you, I'd probably say 'What the hell?' But if I woke up next to Justin, I'd say 'What'd you do?' LMAO!

I could so see that reaction, and I'm glad that Lance was able to talk to JC and Joey, hopefully Chris and Justin would come along.

Great update! :D




Kao (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2012 09:05 pm (Chapter 8)
I think it may be a game, but then again he did say she seemed to have 'become a new Brayden'...



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Sep 09, 2012 09:16 pm (Chapter 8)
I hope she's telling the truth and not playing games, give Joey Custody rights! Thanks for the update :)

Author's Response:

But if she is telling the truth about giving up custody, that doesn't mean she's telling the truth about any of the rest of it! ;) (I'm such a tease!)

Thank you for reading and your review! 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 10, 2012 10:44 pm (Chapter 6)

Looks like Lance won't feel so alone when he's gonna be under suicide prevention watch with Abby, so glad that nothing even more serious has happened to him.

I laughed at these lines here: “Okay,” I said. “I'll do it. I've never done desk work before though, so I don't know if I'm exactly what you had in mind for the job.”

“Well...do you know how to file papers?”

“What do you think I am, a monkey? Of course I know how to file papers.”

LOL

Another good chapter..thanks for updating. :)




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 10, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 5)

Wow..this was a good chapter. Ok, first off, I hope your beta reader is doing okay, *hugs* and thats also nice that your husband is helping you out reading this. :)

In this chapter, it looks like Lance feels that the day in the cell is dragging by oh so slowly, and I like that Damien was explaing his side of the story.

Nicely done..



Author's Response: She's still sick, but she's feeling a little better. I'm sure she'll feel much better once they figure out what's wrong with her. :) Thank you!



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 09, 2012 12:14 am (Chapter 6)

She sighed, then smiled. “If you're half as good at being an assistant as you are at being an unpleasant jackass, I think you'll do just great.”

 That was great!



Author's Response: ;) Thank you!!!



theusagirl (Signed) on Apr 27, 2012 09:55 pm (Chapter 4)

I like how Abby was nice to all the inmates, and when Lance went to his cell and greeted by his cellmates, and told him their stories on how they got in prison. :(

Nicely done though and thanks for updating.. :)




ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Apr 26, 2012 10:07 pm (Chapter 1)

So glad you finally decided to post! Don't know why you were nervous, you are very good :) Miss you!



Author's Response: Whoa do you have good timing, I just posted another chapter after a long wait! Miss you too! I still have to read some of your new stuff!



kasia87 (Signed) on Mar 20, 2012 10:50 pm (Chapter 3)
oh my goodness that was shocking. Love it. Totally want more :) You're so good babe!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks! *blushes* Really, I just had an idea and ran with it. I'm glad people are liking it, because I still have more up my sleeve!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2012 09:39 pm (Chapter 3)

GUH! This was a deep chapter, either Lance pleads guity or goes to trial, man thats rough..and don't worry Lance, you'll pull through this, you have all the guys to back you up. :)

Good job though, and thanks for the update..



Author's Response: Yeah I nearly cried at the end, but this one's a lot more personal to me than most of my others, so it's been hard. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I want to find some time to still read yours too. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2012 09:26 pm (Chapter 2)

WOW! That's awful! There gonna take Lance in..pssh.

lolz but I did laugh at the younger cop's reaction though about Lance being in a boyband..hahaha.

And these lines here "We'll load the girls up on junk food and sugar – you know, like we used to do to Justin, before he went all Mr. Sexyback on us.” LOL! Joey..

Good job, *reads next chapter*




kasia87 (Signed) on Mar 09, 2012 12:34 pm (Chapter 2)
oh my god. caught up and now i'm totally intereted as to where this goes.... (and the plot thickens) :D



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 31, 2012 07:32 pm (Chapter 1)

OOoooh! What a crazy woman! She needs counseling or rehab or something.

Now Lance, yes start over with Bailey and leave psycho chick there. Hmph.

And this line here:“Those who live in glass houses.." On and epi of CSI, I don't know if you watch that show, Grissom says that line, he says "We all live in glass houses Catherine, you have to be careful where you take your shower."

But anyway, this is good. I'm liking this so far. :)



Author's Response:

lol That is a good point, you would have to watch where you shower!

Yes, she's officially crazy. It still surprises me that she's my character. Thank you, I hope to update again soon so it starts making a little bit more sense! 






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