Okay, there are so many things that I absolutely love about this chapter, so I am just going to list them!

1.

“You’re going, too?” Justin shouted, after I passed him. 

“Fuck yeah, it’s McDonald’s.” 

“You both are gonna die!”

2. "You wear ugly as fuck hats to shows and awards and shit, but when you're going out in public, you decide to let your curls loose, and let your entire fucking JC Chasez face show to the world." (My favorite!)

3.

“What do you want?” 

I almost picked up my fist, and rammed it down her throat, but I wasn’t going to because I had already gotten the easy way out, and plus she was working, so she couldn’t have gone to see JC, and perhaps get an autograph, or some shit. So, that was her con from me.

“Three quarter pounder meals. Except I want one medium Diet Coke, and a large Coke.” 

“Anything else?” She asked, rolling her eyes, after punching it in. 

“Yeah, if you were any nicer, I’d probably get you his autograph, but as I can tell, both of us are bitches.” I shrugged, and moved away from the line, after leaving the two twenties on the counter. 

4.

I was more than sure, by now, that there was some sort of chemistry between JC and Justin's sleeping habits -- when one woke up, the other immediately followed, and if one went to bed, the other mosied up and over to his own bed as well. And the fact that a lot of fans had this whole, "Joshtin/JuC" thing going on, made it all just that much funnier.

5. “You’re such a little dick.” 

“Takes one to know one.”

"Obviously you haven't seen my dick." ( I LOVED this!)

6. She pushed the drink and bag towards me, and I sat down on the sofa, ripping open the bag, and seeing that sure enough, she had gotten me two sandwiches, and two fries – it wasn’t my fault I was so big. 

And the whole entire last part where JC doesn't think that Kate's a whore, and Kate answers JC's phone! I loved this whole chapter, and can't wait to read more!

P.S.

I love that you used "Touch My Body", great song!

Ohmygooooooooooddddd!!!!! I love how the girls swarmed JC and how Rachel and him aren't together, and you can see that JC's beginning to change his pov on Kate. I'm glad that makes me happy! I hope to god that it gets better between them! Can't wait to see what happens! 

This chapter had me grinning! Literally grinning. *grins* :D I love that Kate was telling her friend about her and JC having IT! And I would love to go for another round with him. ;) Heck yeah. And yes he's a big boy.. :P He is the kind of guy that makes the sweet, innocent girls, get wild..ahem..shh. LOL

I like the McDonald's part as well, and the convo b/tween JC and Justin..tee hee.

And lastly, Kate told Rachel off, and explained to JC that Rachel was just using him.. I'm like yea :D