Comments For On The Sidelines
theusagirl (Signed) on Apr 16, 2012 09:43 pm (Chapter 4)

JC! Don't run after Chelsea! GRRR! LOL! Smart move of leaving the door open genius..lolz

Ok ok, from the top, these lines here:

"She wanted to go sleep with you last night," Cody went on. "But we heard noises."

Katrina saw JC's head shoot up from the corner of her eye but she ignored his stare. "What kind of noises?" she asked after clearing her throat.

Cody shrugged. "I don't know. It kind of sounded like someone was in pain or something. It was a little weird."

"Were you in pain, Aunt Kat?" Cindy asked, and all three faces looked at JC when a half laugh - half cough sounded.

LMAO! Awkward moment, so glad that Kat and JC managed to change the subject so quickly, aww I love JC's interaction with the kids, and Cody seems so fascinated with the piano..aww. :D

And a day at the pool with sounds oh so fun! And love the playful banter b/tween those two.. :D

Great job! And thanks for the update!



Author's Response: LOL Thanks for the read and review! I'm glad you're enjyoing the story!



Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 16, 2012 04:52 pm (Chapter 4)
What a great update :). I really enjoyed how the kids took to JC right away and wanted to hang out with him all day. Also enjoyed the playful banter between JC and Kat. And now Chelsea caught them...oh goodness. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I just love the image of JC with kids. I'm glad you're enjoying JC and Kat's playful antics. I will be adding more soon! :))



AngelEyes81 (Signed) on Apr 16, 2012 12:54 pm (Chapter 4)
Yay thanks for the update.... Waiting for more :D Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks much! Really glad you're enjoying it! :))



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Apr 15, 2012 10:58 pm (Chapter 4)

Worth the wait!! Thanks for updating :)



Author's Response: Woot! Thank you :)) I shall be updating soon!





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