Comments For The Beautiful Ones
Nana (Anonymous) on Feb 02, 2013 01:46 pm (pressing engagements)
Ashley please please please update ! Is been forever just do it! 



Nikki (Anonymous) on Oct 24, 2012 05:42 pm (pressing engagements)
Me, too. Sad face.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 03, 2012 05:34 pm (pressing engagements)
I keep looking for an update.  I really miss this story.



Nikki (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2012 03:36 pm (pressing engagements)

Thanks for the update, but I need more, much more. For the record, I'm over Justin for the moment. If he wants to hook up with his engaged, ex-wife, then so be it. I know Nadia isn't a saint, but like I said in an earlier review, she acknowledges her issues and is trying to the best of her capability to work it out. Justin, Mila...I don't see any progress whatsoever.

 It's going to take a lot for my feelings to change toward Justin bc at this point, he should be apologizing to Nadia. I was just thinking about how he was hooking up with Nadia for all the wedding party to see. Then he's hooking up with Mila for all to see. Justin's a whore, and I'm not so fond of him right now.




Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2012 09:25 pm (pressing engagements)
I'm anxious for an update...sad face.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay! But alas, here you go!



Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 15, 2012 09:07 am (pressing engagements)

Oh wow, it's so funny I was seriously going to leave you some words bc I hadn't seen an update yet. I was deprived and you were going to hear, but then I see you updated on yesterday. Not sure how I missed it.

 Anyways, woah. I don't know how to respond either. All I know is that everyone of them is WARPED in the brain(Justin, Nadia, Mila and Alex...James, I know nothing about him yet so whose to say he isn't either). You have Nadia, this heifa doesn't know what she wants. Justin, this idiot is lingering on a lost love. Mila is selfish, needy biotch, and Alex, I just feel sorry for her, she needs to just move. Sorry, I needed to vent again but these people are driving me up the wall. Honestly, even though it appears that Nadia is the most frustrating(and she is), she's the only one that seems to acknowledge her issues and putting forth some form of an effort, be it minute, to fix it. A pregnancy would push that along for her. I just see her trying, I even see Alex trying trying to fix her issues, but Justin and Mila, not so much.

 I'm done, I had to let it out. Great as always. UPDATE SOON, LIKE YESTERDAY.



Author's Response: Goodness, I'm glad you noticed the update before you went off on me lmao. Warped in the brain is a mild way of putting it. These fools are fucked up! (And yeah, it's probably safe to say James is included.) And what's even more awesome is that everyone sees what's wrong with everyone else, but not themselves. Ha. But I guess that's how it works in real life, too. Maybe when the pregnancy makes front page news, they can all figure out how to get their shit together! I wouldn't count on it, but hey, you never know! I'm glad you got it out though, boo. That's what I'm here for -- talk to me girl!



cali_meg07 (Signed) on Aug 05, 2012 12:20 am (pressing engagements)

Oh and now things get complicated!! I knew things weren't over with Justin and Mila. :) I loved the scene on the porch when they were just talking... So well written and I could totally relate to their conversation lol. Keep it up! I can't wait to find out what happens!!



Author's Response: Oh, Megan, we are just on the cusp of complicated! But yeah, Justin has been waiting for this moment since before the story began. And Mila, well, as much as she's tried to hide, so has she lol. The conversation they had is one of my favorite moments in the story, so I super appreciate you saying that. I think a lot of us can probably relate to that feeling on some level or another! Thanks a bunch for the review! <3



Emmie (Signed) on Jul 23, 2012 03:21 pm (pressing engagements)
I love love love how you've been updating more! And Nadia is so frustrating! She needs to get it together. Love the update!



Emmie (Signed) on Jul 22, 2012 09:37 pm (pressing engagements)
Great update!



Devon (I hardly ever feel like logging in) (Anonymous) on Jul 20, 2012 09:10 am (pressing engagements)

I have been reading but I haven't been reviewing...I've been in a funk, but I always enjoy your writing and I think you know that.

What to say....what to say...When I first started reading this I adored Nadia. Like I think she's a cool ass chick, but her flaws are really coming out big time. I think she cares about her feelings more than anyone elses...I think she wants to be around people when SHE wants to be around people, and when she doesn't then it's fuck you. And she's lying. She needs to be real with herself as well as everyone else. And if she's going to conitnue to be this way then Justin need not even bother.

 That was hard to say, because I really liked them in the beginning, and I still kinda do, but...she's being so oashbfoauhbfgoubsngijab golsanbfg.

 Mila on the other hand, she has no room to even be the least bit jealous because the last time I checked she was engaged to be married. If she wants Justin that's fine, if she wants to break up with dude to be with Justin that's fine...what's not fine is her trying to tell Justin what to do while she's living her life. So...not...fine.

Also, Nadia needs to figure out what team she wants to bat for. It's not going to be fair to Justin or anyone else if she goes back to Alex, only to fuck around with Justin, to go back to Alex.

Normally at this point in the story I could at least have a theory on where this is leading...but I haven't a clue! And I love you for that, keep the surprises coming!




Nikki (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2012 05:04 pm (pressing engagements)
I'm team Mila in real life; however, I can't say the same for her in this story. How audacious of her to tell him not to date Nadia? You're ENGAGED, you have no right to dictate his life. I know they have history and I can respect that, but she's still showing that she hasn't matured much. She gets engaged literally after her divorce is final and then when she sees that he's starting to move on, you won't allow him that. That's not love to me. I feel that Nadia and Justin are actually better people, together, like they help each other to be better and that if there was rain and thunder, they would always fight for the 'US' at the end of the day. Sorry, had to get it off my chest but your stories always get me riled up.

Author's Response: Audacious is an awesome word. And that is the perfect descriptor for Miss Mila. Because yeah, she got a little bold for someone that's marrying someone else lol. And you're right, maturity has a lot to do with that. I think I said this to someone else, but at this point, Mila is very much trying to prove that she can find her happy elsewhere and outside of Justin, though she may be failing. There a lot of emotions mixed in there -- love, hate, pride, jealousy. It's a mess. But I like your assessment of Nadia and Justin. I like it a lot, actually! So please don't ever apologize, because I absolutely LOVE hearing from you! <3



Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 26, 2012 01:35 pm (pressing engagements)
I'm in love with this story!! I can't wait to find out what's  going on with Nadia ..

Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I can't wait to tell you what's going on with Nadia! Well I can, that's part of the fun, but I can't wait for you to find out, too! LOL.



isela (Anonymous) on May 13, 2012 04:00 pm (pressing engagements)
i like mila in real life, so i can't help rooting for her over nadia. dying to know what went down with their marriage ending as you keep hinting at.   can't wait to see where this is all going - as usual i have no idea and i love that!

Author's Response: I don't blame you, I love me some Mila, and particularly, JuMila lol. I promise there'll be more insight into their marriage as we get further in. And I admit I'm not sure exactly how I want all this to end, but you know I love my triangles, so hopefully we'll have some fun on the way. Seriously, thanks so much for reading! <3



cali_meg07 (Signed) on May 09, 2012 06:21 pm (pressing engagements)

Oooo I'm liking this! But not liking Mila lol. Poor Justin! Great job!

On to read the next chapter... 



Author's Response: Awww, thanks! And Mila is a bit much at the moment, but her darkness may very well come to the light lol. Gracias for reviewing, I hope you enjoy!



Joyce (Anonymous) on May 03, 2012 12:23 am (pressing engagements)
Omg! Keep going! Dont stop like that! Lol

Author's Response: Bahaha I just freaked out a little because my mom's name is Joyce, and wow... the terror that just went coursing through my veins, you just don't know! But seriously, thank you for reading! And I will try and keep the updates coming frequently, for you! Lol.





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