Thanks for the update, but I need more, much more. For the record, I'm over Justin for the moment. If he wants to hook up with his engaged, ex-wife, then so be it. I know Nadia isn't a saint, but like I said in an earlier review, she acknowledges her issues and is trying to the best of her capability to work it out. Justin, Mila...I don't see any progress whatsoever.
It's going to take a lot for my feelings to change toward Justin bc at this point, he should be apologizing to Nadia. I was just thinking about how he was hooking up with Nadia for all the wedding party to see. Then he's hooking up with Mila for all to see. Justin's a whore, and I'm not so fond of him right now.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay! But alas, here you go!
Oh wow, it's so funny I was seriously going to leave you some words bc I hadn't seen an update yet. I was deprived and you were going to hear, but then I see you updated on yesterday. Not sure how I missed it.
Anyways, woah. I don't know how to respond either. All I know is that everyone of them is WARPED in the brain(Justin, Nadia, Mila and Alex...James, I know nothing about him yet so whose to say he isn't either). You have Nadia, this heifa doesn't know what she wants. Justin, this idiot is lingering on a lost love. Mila is selfish, needy biotch, and Alex, I just feel sorry for her, she needs to just move. Sorry, I needed to vent again but these people are driving me up the wall. Honestly, even though it appears that Nadia is the most frustrating(and she is), she's the only one that seems to acknowledge her issues and putting forth some form of an effort, be it minute, to fix it. A pregnancy would push that along for her. I just see her trying, I even see Alex trying trying to fix her issues, but Justin and Mila, not so much.
I'm done, I had to let it out. Great as always. UPDATE SOON, LIKE YESTERDAY.
Author's Response: Goodness, I'm glad you noticed the update before you went off on me lmao. Warped in the brain is a mild way of putting it. These fools are fucked up! (And yeah, it's probably safe to say James is included.) And what's even more awesome is that everyone sees what's wrong with everyone else, but not themselves. Ha. But I guess that's how it works in real life, too. Maybe when the pregnancy makes front page news, they can all figure out how to get their shit together! I wouldn't count on it, but hey, you never know! I'm glad you got it out though, boo. That's what I'm here for -- talk to me girl!
Oh and now things get complicated!! I knew things weren't over with Justin and Mila. :) I loved the scene on the porch when they were just talking... So well written and I could totally relate to their conversation lol. Keep it up! I can't wait to find out what happens!!
Author's Response: Oh, Megan, we are just on the cusp of complicated! But yeah, Justin has been waiting for this moment since before the story began. And Mila, well, as much as she's tried to hide, so has she lol. The conversation they had is one of my favorite moments in the story, so I super appreciate you saying that. I think a lot of us can probably relate to that feeling on some level or another! Thanks a bunch for the review! <3
I have been reading but I haven't been reviewing...I've been in a funk, but I always enjoy your writing and I think you know that.
What to say....what to say...When I first started reading this I adored Nadia. Like I think she's a cool ass chick, but her flaws are really coming out big time. I think she cares about her feelings more than anyone elses...I think she wants to be around people when SHE wants to be around people, and when she doesn't then it's fuck you. And she's lying. She needs to be real with herself as well as everyone else. And if she's going to conitnue to be this way then Justin need not even bother.
That was hard to say, because I really liked them in the beginning, and I still kinda do, but...she's being so oashbfoauhbfgoubsngijab golsanbfg.
Mila on the other hand, she has no room to even be the least bit jealous because the last time I checked she was engaged to be married. If she wants Justin that's fine, if she wants to break up with dude to be with Justin that's fine...what's not fine is her trying to tell Justin what to do while she's living her life. So...not...fine.
Also, Nadia needs to figure out what team she wants to bat for. It's not going to be fair to Justin or anyone else if she goes back to Alex, only to fuck around with Justin, to go back to Alex.
Normally at this point in the story I could at least have a theory on where this is leading...but I haven't a clue! And I love you for that, keep the surprises coming!
Author's Response: Audacious is an awesome word. And that is the perfect descriptor for Miss Mila. Because yeah, she got a little bold for someone that's marrying someone else lol. And you're right, maturity has a lot to do with that. I think I said this to someone else, but at this point, Mila is very much trying to prove that she can find her happy elsewhere and outside of Justin, though she may be failing. There a lot of emotions mixed in there -- love, hate, pride, jealousy. It's a mess. But I like your assessment of Nadia and Justin. I like it a lot, actually! So please don't ever apologize, because I absolutely LOVE hearing from you! <3
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I can't wait to tell you what's going on with Nadia! Well I can, that's part of the fun, but I can't wait for you to find out, too! LOL.
Author's Response: I don't blame you, I love me some Mila, and particularly, JuMila lol. I promise there'll be more insight into their marriage as we get further in. And I admit I'm not sure exactly how I want all this to end, but you know I love my triangles, so hopefully we'll have some fun on the way. Seriously, thanks so much for reading! <3
Oooo I'm liking this! But not liking Mila lol. Poor Justin! Great job!
On to read the next chapter...
Author's Response: Awww, thanks! And Mila is a bit much at the moment, but her darkness may very well come to the light lol. Gracias for reviewing, I hope you enjoy!
Author's Response: Bahaha I just freaked out a little because my mom's name is Joyce, and wow... the terror that just went coursing through my veins, you just don't know! But seriously, thank you for reading! And I will try and keep the updates coming frequently, for you! Lol.