Comments For The Beautiful Ones
bogglethemind (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2012 01:50 am (the walk of shame)

OMG, chick! Seriously, omg. I'm sorry about my slow ass, but I just got caught up on the last three chapters. And boy oh boy was that A LOT to process! This story is a tangled web of  fuckery, and I love every minute of it. LOL! I thought I knew how to make a mess of things, but you really are the Queen when it comes to that. Ha! First, somebody else said that you write the best vows for your stories, and I totally agree with that because it's true. Secondly, I think you write my favorite dialogue, like, ever. It just feels so real.

Next, I really thought the claws were going to come out in that kitchen scene with Nadia and Mila. I really thought they were going to start yanking each other's hair and shit. LMAO! Finally, everybody in this story is being a monumental jackass at the moment, but for some reason, I'm highly entertained by this. Also, whoa at that curveball you just threw. Seriously wasn't expecting that! But that is why you are the bee's knees.

To be honest, this is the only Justin story I'm reading at the moment. I'm too busy reading (…and writing) about… um, somebody else. But I love you and your writing and your crazy ass characters, so I would follow you to the ends of the earth, my love! I'm also very impressed by how consistent you've been with your updates, by the way. I wish I could stay that consistent.

Anyway, still don't know how this story is going to end, but my body is ready! /tumblr

*muah*



Author's Response: Hey, you never ever have to apologize. I am so honored if you read a single word of mine! I'm not so sure I can rightly take the Queen of Fuckery crown from you, but I am so very glad to be in the running. It's so fun to create these messes and then try to clean them up, isn't it? LOL. I truly cannot take credit for these vows, because I so phoned it in with the movie quotes, but I really appreciate it. For all the times I did try lmao. And on the dialogue tip, I thank you x982072601002. It's probably the most effortless thing/what I try hardest at. Catfights and curveballs are fun, but I like to see people just talking, especially when it's from the heart. So thanks for that! And I totally understand having an interest in... somebody else lol. Justin makes it so difficult sometimes! I'm surprised I've continued to write this story given how little he's given me to work with lately! But I'll try to keep it coming. And now, all I am picturing is a gif of Alan Rickman, so thanks for leaving me with that image! Love you girl! And hey, let's head to the ends of the earth side by side. <3



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2012 10:10 am (the walk of shame)
Omg if nadia is pregnant mila is going to flip out I have no doubt about it but i wonder what Justin will say about it. he is finally getting his wife back like he seems to want but things won't go down so easyly if they end up having a baby together. i have no idea what way this is going to go and i love itttttt please pms!!!

Author's Response: You are so very right, this is the exact wrong timing for Justin when he's finally getting just what he wants. And Mila probably will have a coronary... which will actually be good for Nadia lol. But it's safe to say all of them are and will be losing it little by little with all the tension mounting between them! Stay tuuuned!



B-Twice (Signed) on Aug 08, 2012 09:09 am (the walk of shame)
I wouldn't have even acknowledge the stank heffa!! HOW she still got an attitude when you just slept with him!?! Mila played with Justin and used him for her on vendetta !! and yet she don't feel any better.

Author's Response: And she's gonna feel a whole lot worse when she finds out Nadia's pregnant! Might be a long nine months for her. And, well, everyone surrounding her if we're being honest! Le sigh lol.



JoJo (Signed) on Aug 08, 2012 12:33 am (the walk of shame)
WOW!! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: "Wow" is one of my favorite responses! And I will definitely try to update soon. Gracias!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2012 08:57 pm (the walk of shame)
Holy shit!

Author's Response: LOL I love that response!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2012 08:55 pm (the walk of shame)
I'm glad Mila showed some shame for her behavior. Lashing out at Nadia was so uncalled for. Everyone seems to have issues in this story. Poor Nadia, she's so hurt but what does she expect. Nadia is going to need to do some groveling if she wants to get back into Justin's good graces. I don't know how this story is going to end up and I like that.

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like life tends to be unpredictable and real people have real issues, so I wanted to go that route and see where I ended up lol. Mila may have the biggest issues of them all, quite honestly! But there's lots of work for all of them to do, and quite a few chapters left for them to do it. So stick around! I'll try to make it good lol.



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 07, 2012 07:47 pm (the walk of shame)

O.M.flippin.G!!! It would be epic major if she's pregnant! Please let it be so! If for no other reason than Mila shitting a brick, it'll be WELL worth it! Ha! Wonders never cease, you NEVER, EVER disappoint!

Ki



Author's Response: Lmao at Mila shitting a brick. Hey, ask and you just might receive! I thought it would be a nice, big shock to all of their systems, but honestly, you're right -- Mila would be most likely to totally flip out lol. I'll see what I can do about that. And more importantly, thank you so much, Ki. You never disappoint with your feedback and I appreciate it so, so very much! <3



the fresh princess (Signed) on Aug 07, 2012 07:45 pm (the walk of shame)
I need you to know this is a extra loud extra dramatic soap opera scream..... NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL! I love it, I hear you girl. I hear you!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 07, 2012 07:42 pm (the walk of shame)

Oh. Shit.

What a twist!  I love this story so much, and I am praying for Nadia...I have no idea which way I want this to go, either, lol.  I just want her to love herself...and I'd like Justin to love her, too :)

OH! I can't wait to see what happens next.  Love it! 



Author's Response: Haha, yeah a twist indeed. I love how invested you are in Nadia and her well being, because it really isn't going too well for her, is it? But hey, maybe she and Justin will have a "I will try to fix you" moment sooner than later. I'd actually like to see that myself lol. But before I start rambling, let me just say thank you! Your feedback is always super appreciated!



Tiffany (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2012 07:17 pm (the walk of shame)
I can that at the end of this story wither nadia or mila will be with justin

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not sure who he'll end up with either, so trust me when I say we will find out together! LOL





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