Comments For The Beautiful Ones
Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2012 09:25 pm (pressing engagements)
I'm anxious for an update...sad face.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay! But alas, here you go!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Aug 21, 2012 10:27 pm (coffee black and egg white)
Wow girl, could you make Justin and Nadia's situation any more messy?! Are those two ever going to get it together? I'm beginning to believe that Nadia and Justin don't belong with each other. Both of them have too many unresolve issues with former or current love interests. Good chapter even though I'm so frustrated!

Author's Response: LOL yeah, I'm not sure I could mess them up any more if I tried! But don't give up hope yet, despite all the baggage they are carrying, they are also about to have a child together, which could very well change everything! Or... it could make it much worse. Yeah. You might be right lol. But you know I'm not giving anything away (...mostly because I'm not sure myself), so stay tuned!



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2012 07:53 am (coffee black and egg white)
So she Is officially pregnant what a mess. I feel bad for her esp, if Justin is going to be rude to her through the pregnancy. it seems that now that he is with mila he isnt going to give her the time of day and that sucks. Can't wait to see what happens please pms. 

Author's Response: Yep, it's official. And it can definitely get messy if it's not fixed soon. If he is wrapped around Mila's finger as tightly as it seems, it could also definitely spell trouble for Nadia, but I'd say she is probably not one to be mistreated. If anything, it might suck for him lol. But stay tuned! I'm interested to see how this turns out myself lol.



B-Twice (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 08:36 am (coffee black and egg white)
Everyone just needs to be prescribed some pills because clearly all this f**kers need mediciation ..... Of course she would be pregnant at the most AWKWARD TIME!!...and of couse Justin wouldn't answer the phone!!...of course Mila WILL NOT tell her boo about Justin...and Justin is going to find out Nadia is pregnant...ALL AT THE SAME TIME! lol

Author's Response: Yes ma'am, it is the perfect storm of fuckery! Justin's not speaking to Nadia, who hates Mila, whose fiance thinks she still hates her ex-husband. The ex-husband who got another woman pregnant, who has a semi-girlfriend of her own that refuses to let her go. At the same damn time! Yas girl, it is indeed a mess. Medication is probably a good idea. Except for Nadia. Because yeah.



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 15, 2012 10:15 pm (coffee black and egg white)

I fuckin love you!!! Now just let Mila find out and all will be right in the world lol.

Ki



Author's Response: LOL! I love you back! Mila will find out soon, I promise. And just a wild guess, but she probably won't be happy about it, hehe.



monijt1 (Signed) on Aug 15, 2012 01:16 pm (coffee black and egg white)

 

Nadia is not my girl, anymore. The crap she has been doing over the past couple chapters, has me mad at her. She needs to get her ish together, its past overdue.

Not surprise about the pregnancy, but I am praying for the baby. If Nadia decides to have it (I hope she does), he/she will be born into a hot mess.  

Alex irks my soul, for some unknown reason. Maybe it's because she's so dumb when it comes to Nadia. I wonder if Nadia’s pregnancy is a wakeup call for her.

I'm also not shock about Justin and Mila the hypocrite hooking up. It was bound to happen sooner, or later.

I can’t wait to see how Justin reacts when he finds out that he's a father.  

 



Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry I ruined Nadia for you! But she was always meant to be a little bit tragic, and given what's been dropped in her lap, her current state is pretty inevitable. But if she does keep the baby, yeah, there is a lot to clean up before he/she comes into the world. I can take a guess as to why Alex irks you, though -- she's annoying as all get out! But Nadia is not faultless in that either. Just as Justin and Mila have their own demons that need to be examined. Stay tuned girl, I'll try to keep it interesting lol.



Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 15, 2012 09:07 am (pressing engagements)

Oh wow, it's so funny I was seriously going to leave you some words bc I hadn't seen an update yet. I was deprived and you were going to hear, but then I see you updated on yesterday. Not sure how I missed it.

 Anyways, woah. I don't know how to respond either. All I know is that everyone of them is WARPED in the brain(Justin, Nadia, Mila and Alex...James, I know nothing about him yet so whose to say he isn't either). You have Nadia, this heifa doesn't know what she wants. Justin, this idiot is lingering on a lost love. Mila is selfish, needy biotch, and Alex, I just feel sorry for her, she needs to just move. Sorry, I needed to vent again but these people are driving me up the wall. Honestly, even though it appears that Nadia is the most frustrating(and she is), she's the only one that seems to acknowledge her issues and putting forth some form of an effort, be it minute, to fix it. A pregnancy would push that along for her. I just see her trying, I even see Alex trying trying to fix her issues, but Justin and Mila, not so much.

 I'm done, I had to let it out. Great as always. UPDATE SOON, LIKE YESTERDAY.



Author's Response: Goodness, I'm glad you noticed the update before you went off on me lmao. Warped in the brain is a mild way of putting it. These fools are fucked up! (And yeah, it's probably safe to say James is included.) And what's even more awesome is that everyone sees what's wrong with everyone else, but not themselves. Ha. But I guess that's how it works in real life, too. Maybe when the pregnancy makes front page news, they can all figure out how to get their shit together! I wouldn't count on it, but hey, you never know! I'm glad you got it out though, boo. That's what I'm here for -- talk to me girl!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 15, 2012 08:13 am (coffee black and egg white)
I love this fuckery. LOL 

Author's Response: Lol straight to the point. Thank you much! I love writing it!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 14, 2012 04:54 pm (coffee black and egg white)

Well shit.  This is a royal mess.  I don't even have a comment, lol.  You've left me speechless.

Here's hoping things work themselves out soon :)  and here's knowing that they probably won't! 



Author's Response: Ha! A royal mess, indeed. I think you're right though, things working themselves out eventually is a possibility. But soon? Eh... unlikely lol. But thanks for sticking around anyway!



bogglethemind (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2012 01:50 am (the walk of shame)

OMG, chick! Seriously, omg. I'm sorry about my slow ass, but I just got caught up on the last three chapters. And boy oh boy was that A LOT to process! This story is a tangled web of  fuckery, and I love every minute of it. LOL! I thought I knew how to make a mess of things, but you really are the Queen when it comes to that. Ha! First, somebody else said that you write the best vows for your stories, and I totally agree with that because it's true. Secondly, I think you write my favorite dialogue, like, ever. It just feels so real.

Next, I really thought the claws were going to come out in that kitchen scene with Nadia and Mila. I really thought they were going to start yanking each other's hair and shit. LMAO! Finally, everybody in this story is being a monumental jackass at the moment, but for some reason, I'm highly entertained by this. Also, whoa at that curveball you just threw. Seriously wasn't expecting that! But that is why you are the bee's knees.

To be honest, this is the only Justin story I'm reading at the moment. I'm too busy reading (…and writing) about… um, somebody else. But I love you and your writing and your crazy ass characters, so I would follow you to the ends of the earth, my love! I'm also very impressed by how consistent you've been with your updates, by the way. I wish I could stay that consistent.

Anyway, still don't know how this story is going to end, but my body is ready! /tumblr

*muah*



Author's Response: Hey, you never ever have to apologize. I am so honored if you read a single word of mine! I'm not so sure I can rightly take the Queen of Fuckery crown from you, but I am so very glad to be in the running. It's so fun to create these messes and then try to clean them up, isn't it? LOL. I truly cannot take credit for these vows, because I so phoned it in with the movie quotes, but I really appreciate it. For all the times I did try lmao. And on the dialogue tip, I thank you x982072601002. It's probably the most effortless thing/what I try hardest at. Catfights and curveballs are fun, but I like to see people just talking, especially when it's from the heart. So thanks for that! And I totally understand having an interest in... somebody else lol. Justin makes it so difficult sometimes! I'm surprised I've continued to write this story given how little he's given me to work with lately! But I'll try to keep it coming. And now, all I am picturing is a gif of Alan Rickman, so thanks for leaving me with that image! Love you girl! And hey, let's head to the ends of the earth side by side. <3



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2012 10:10 am (the walk of shame)
Omg if nadia is pregnant mila is going to flip out I have no doubt about it but i wonder what Justin will say about it. he is finally getting his wife back like he seems to want but things won't go down so easyly if they end up having a baby together. i have no idea what way this is going to go and i love itttttt please pms!!!

Author's Response: You are so very right, this is the exact wrong timing for Justin when he's finally getting just what he wants. And Mila probably will have a coronary... which will actually be good for Nadia lol. But it's safe to say all of them are and will be losing it little by little with all the tension mounting between them! Stay tuuuned!



B-Twice (Signed) on Aug 08, 2012 09:09 am (the walk of shame)
I wouldn't have even acknowledge the stank heffa!! HOW she still got an attitude when you just slept with him!?! Mila played with Justin and used him for her on vendetta !! and yet she don't feel any better.

Author's Response: And she's gonna feel a whole lot worse when she finds out Nadia's pregnant! Might be a long nine months for her. And, well, everyone surrounding her if we're being honest! Le sigh lol.



JoJo (Signed) on Aug 08, 2012 12:33 am (the walk of shame)
WOW!! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: "Wow" is one of my favorite responses! And I will definitely try to update soon. Gracias!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2012 08:57 pm (the walk of shame)
Holy shit!

Author's Response: LOL I love that response!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2012 08:55 pm (the walk of shame)
I'm glad Mila showed some shame for her behavior. Lashing out at Nadia was so uncalled for. Everyone seems to have issues in this story. Poor Nadia, she's so hurt but what does she expect. Nadia is going to need to do some groveling if she wants to get back into Justin's good graces. I don't know how this story is going to end up and I like that.

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like life tends to be unpredictable and real people have real issues, so I wanted to go that route and see where I ended up lol. Mila may have the biggest issues of them all, quite honestly! But there's lots of work for all of them to do, and quite a few chapters left for them to do it. So stick around! I'll try to make it good lol.





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