Comments For The Beautiful Ones
B-Twice (Signed) on Jul 30, 2012 09:36 pm (give a little more)
Mila is going to find  a way to SCREW all this progress up ..when it does keep going..and Justin is hiding stuff too!! Oh man!!! This is good

Author's Response: Wellllll, you might be right about that, not even gonna lie. Mila is still very much in the picture and with all the tension swirling around them, that can't be good, huh? Stay tuuuned!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2012 06:03 pm (give a little more)
She's so frustrating. 

Author's Response: Lol I know. I'll try and fix it... eventually!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 30, 2012 02:29 pm (give a little more)

Oh man.  I have no idea who's side to take here.  I totally get JT's frustration and why he's fed up, and yet I understand Nadia and her fear of opening up.  What a mess they're in!  I totally hope she's able to let go of some of her fear, though, and that Justin is able to cut her a little slack, too.  

Gah!  I love it! 



Author's Response: It's definitely one of those cases of everybody's a little bit wrong and a little bit right. Though I do think Nadia might be a little bit more wrong than right. If someone's giving you ample opportunity to not be an asshole and you don't take it... well shame on you lol. But she clearly has issues, so yeah. Lot's of stuff to fix! Thank you, as always, for your review!



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2012 08:59 am (give a little more)
You know a part of me kind of feels bad for nadia esp. after she talked to grant i think she is truely scared and justin is not making it any easier for her..... I want her to just trust him but i understand that is easier said then done so I hope he backs off a little and i hope she can get it together!! Thanks for the great update!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess if you look at it from her perspective, she is a little bit of a sympathetic character. But Justin is giving her the chance to let it out and she is doing the exact opposite. It's a shame! She'll have to be careful before he backs off to the point of being done. I'll see if I can get her together for you, though lol. Thanks for the review!



lizzy99 (Signed) on Jul 30, 2012 08:38 am (give a little more)
Great update, but too much Nadia, I want some Mila and Justin!! :D

Author's Response: Ask and you shall receive, my dear!



JoJo (Signed) on Jul 29, 2012 10:31 pm (give a little more)
So in love with this!! Ok so I'm still Team Nadia but she is being really stupid. She had the perfect time to open up to Justin at the end there and shared nothing. She better get her act together before Justin becomes unavailable. And I applaud Justin for putting his foot down. He deserves some honesty. But please don't give him back to Mila!! Ok I'm done now...can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: You're right, she seems to be making every mistake she can to mess this up. And I can't even think of a good excuse for her, she is just a big closed book! It sucks to watch someone self-destruct, I know, so I am going to see if I can fix her up a little bit for you guys. But I can't promise that Mila won't come into the picture and try to shake things up. Just sayin' lol. Thank you so much for the review!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 23, 2012 09:16 pm (nada from nadia)

Oh Nadia, you poor, poor thing.  She just can't see it, can she?  And you know, even though he's making it rough on her, I'm totally with JT on this one.  She needs to let go and just let someone in!  I hope things are better for the wedding weekend :)

I love this story, btw. 



Author's Response: LOL! I think she can see, she knows she's being an asshole. She just can't see how to stop. Which, I guess, is the same thing as not seeing. But I'm with you and Justin, it's time to stop holding onto all the nonsense weighing her down. Maybe he'll stop being frustrated enough to help her out with that lol. We shall seeee. Also, I thank you so very much! <3



Emmie (Signed) on Jul 23, 2012 03:21 pm (pressing engagements)
I love love love how you've been updating more! And Nadia is so frustrating! She needs to get it together. Love the update!



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Jul 23, 2012 06:40 am (nada from nadia)
Nadia will have to get it together bc i have a feeling mila is just waiting for the right moment to take Justin back. She has already told justin not to date her so her acting like this makes me think he is going to take her advice. Just tell the truth nadia!!!! Ahhh she is driving me crazy but please pms

Author's Response: LOL yeeeah, I think she's driving everyone crazy at this point. And you just may be right about Mila swooping in to reclaim her man. Of course there's that whole fiance thing, but... hmmmmmm. Or maybe Nadia will fix herself before all is lost! You'll have to stay tuned! But muchas gracias for reading and reviewing! <3



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2012 10:26 pm (nada from nadia)
Really like this chapter but Nadia is driving me crazy. All these people care for her and she keeps pushing them away. What is her problem? She needs to deal with her issues or she won't have anyone. Get her some help please because she doesn't seem to want to help herself.

Author's Response: You are not alone, girl. I think she's driving everyone crazy, especially the people around her lol. I think part of her problem is that she doesn't know what her problem is, which can be just as frustrating to yourself as it is to the people that have to deal with it! But I'll see if I can fix her. I make no promises, though! LOL. Thanks for reading. <3



Emmie (Signed) on Jul 22, 2012 09:37 pm (pressing engagements)
Great update!



Tink (Signed) on Jul 22, 2012 02:11 pm (nada from nadia)
Great chapter, can't wait to read more and find out nadia's story

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I promise you will get plenty of Nadia by the end of this thing lol.



B-Twice (Signed) on Jul 22, 2012 12:35 pm (nada from nadia)

If she does not get it together I'm going to choke her!!!! How you gunna apologize, but feel no need to explain!! UGHHH she works a nerve!! LOL!!

 

great update!!! 



Author's Response: Lmao! I am getting the feeling you might be frustrated with Nadia? I could be wrong lol! But yeah, she does work a nerve, especially considering the hoops she's had Justin jump through just to be friends. I get it, girl. I get it! I can't say I will fix it, but I get it! Thanks so much for your review!



Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 20, 2012 07:41 pm (trust issues)

It's the beautiful ones that make things complicate. Nadia is so deliciously complicated that she makes this whole story so easy to read. Justin and Mila are so cute and you are really good at getting us to fall in love with whomever it is Justin's with before the character. I want to not like Mila as much as I do but I can't help it. She adorable, especially when she's jealous. Good grief woman, you rock socks!



Author's Response: Yes girl, you are so right. The beautiful ones are complicating the hell out of things! LOL. But thank you so, so much. I try lol. And honestly, my inspiration for Justin and Mila is mostly because I wish they were a real couple. I imagine she's a lot cooler in real life, but here, she's someone trying to find herself after having her identity tied to someone else since she became an adult, and so... we'll see how she handles it all. Can't say it's gonna be pretty, but I thank you sooooo much for your review! Stick around!



Devon (I hardly ever feel like logging in) (Anonymous) on Jul 20, 2012 09:10 am (pressing engagements)

I have been reading but I haven't been reviewing...I've been in a funk, but I always enjoy your writing and I think you know that.

What to say....what to say...When I first started reading this I adored Nadia. Like I think she's a cool ass chick, but her flaws are really coming out big time. I think she cares about her feelings more than anyone elses...I think she wants to be around people when SHE wants to be around people, and when she doesn't then it's fuck you. And she's lying. She needs to be real with herself as well as everyone else. And if she's going to conitnue to be this way then Justin need not even bother.

 That was hard to say, because I really liked them in the beginning, and I still kinda do, but...she's being so oashbfoauhbfgoubsngijab golsanbfg.

 Mila on the other hand, she has no room to even be the least bit jealous because the last time I checked she was engaged to be married. If she wants Justin that's fine, if she wants to break up with dude to be with Justin that's fine...what's not fine is her trying to tell Justin what to do while she's living her life. So...not...fine.

Also, Nadia needs to figure out what team she wants to bat for. It's not going to be fair to Justin or anyone else if she goes back to Alex, only to fuck around with Justin, to go back to Alex.

Normally at this point in the story I could at least have a theory on where this is leading...but I haven't a clue! And I love you for that, keep the surprises coming!






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