Betsy Collins has been living the good life since she met Preston Harrington two years ago, and up until now, she felt she was with him for all the right reasons.  Now, with a rock on her finger the size of the Hope Diamond, part of her is starting to feel like she could be making a mistake, even though her friends and family think she’s headed in the right direction.

Does the above look familiar? I just reread that and realized how you flipped the script and how this can 'somewhat' apply to Justin and Val.

Yessssssss, I knew it. You got me, throwing me for these loops but, no offense to Val, she sweet and all but Justin/Ava need 'time' together. Betsy needs time to get herself in order, too, so you already know how I feel.

He's finally seen the light but it still irks me that it took someone else to point this out to him. Of all people, it was Val. Don't get me wrong, I don't dislike the girl but she's just in the midst of a terrible situation. I'm not going to lie, I won't be happy without a Justin/Betsy relationship finality...but if you so choose to end it w/ Justin/Val, I'll just have to deal. Just happy that he now acknowledges that she sacrificed such a great deal(herself) for him.

I've been reading this story since the beginning and I've never seen so many twists in a story. You have thrown me for a loop from start to finish. Even with Justin and Val, you might throw something else at me. However, it kinda bothers me when Justin says he doesn't have the time/risk helping Betsy. I understand to a degree, but then agree, she risked a lot for him and in some twisted way, he might be considered a possible cause. She pretty much gave up everything for him and look at her now, look at him. I understand why he can't risk helping, but it still bothers me, after all that she's done and gone through to help him succeed.

 Good story, though.

I just recently started reading this, and have been keeping up with the updates in the past couple of weeks. Oh my goodness, what a crazy, crazy story! It's different and you've written it so well. Preston is just an insane bastard!

 Keep up the great work!