Comments For Semper Fidelis
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2013 04:11 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
Wow. Ok. I had to review before moving on to Part B because this was a heavy chapter.  I was so sad while Justin was reliving Chad's death, but then when he told Chloe...the tears came.  That was so hard to read.  I know this is a story, but Cloe is smart just like kids in real life. They pick up on so much and understand things we don't realize they do.  Her being scared for her mom...She may not fully understand why he's leaving but she knows what can happen when he does.  Her begging him to to go...heartbreaking. I love Chloe and Justin's relationship. I'm happy Justin was finally open to Morgan about what's been going on with him and why he behaves like he's been. So happy Morgan didn't give up on him too.  He did make promises and I know he plans to keep them. He even internally admitted to loving her! I knew he loved Chloe, and figured he cared deeply for Morgan but for him to admit it to himself...Ugh my heart.  Wonder when he will tell her.  Anyway loved this chapter even though it made me sad. Lol I'm glad he spoke to Wilson about things.  And I'm sure I've said this before but y'all have to make this story have a happy ending. I am begging the crap out of y'all to give this story a happy ending. I don't think I could take it if it ended bad. Lol I'm definitely not ready for it to be over yet, but I just thought I'd go ahead and get my request in. Lol off to Part B!



Maria (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 10:53 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
As a former military girlfriend.. I went through EXACTLY what Morgan did! It brought back many memories! Keep writing! :)



Erica (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 08:02 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
Omg I had tears reading the last two chapters!! I love this story to death!!! Hurry with more please lol





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