Comments For Semper Fidelis
Keediluv (Signed) on Sep 09, 2013 10:42 pm (Chapter 10 Part B)

My goodness ladies!!!

This story is all out frickin fantastic!!! I will say, reading this over the last week has had me all over the place but man, this is too good for words! I love that their relationship grew the way it did but gal, you sent me through on this intense Devon chapters. And the sex....shit lol!

 

Chloe is pure awesome!

 

Ki

P.S- Please, please, please let him come home safe :) 




Maria (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 10:53 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
As a former military girlfriend.. I went through EXACTLY what Morgan did! It brought back many memories! Keep writing! :)



Nikki (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 08:16 pm (Prologue)
Oh. My. Gosh. That was definitely worth the wait. I have no words for what I just read. Awesome. I enthusiastically wait for the next chapter.



Erica (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 08:02 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
Omg I had tears reading the last two chapters!! I love this story to death!!! Hurry with more please lol



Nikki (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2013 09:50 am (Prologue)
Pleeeeeeassse, where are ya'll? I need another update or many updates.

Author's Response: It's coming! Sorry. As you know, there's a lot going on with our characters and we want to make sure it's as close to perfect as possible before we post. Check back this time next week, we should have something up for you :)



Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Aug 13, 2013 03:27 am (Chapter 9 part B)

This story is so good! Just finished the last chapter and looking forward to more! Way to go, girls!

Alysen B. :) 




MochaB (Signed) on Aug 04, 2013 05:24 pm (Chapter 9 part B)

Ugh I didn't need this to end. This chapter was just too good. Justin...listen to your dad! I'm sure it's hard to talk about, but getting pinned down and chocked must not be so easy either.  Either he talks or Morgan leaves.  He may make her feel safe, and I know he wouldn't intentionally hurt her, but she has a history with someone who has been violent to her in the past after claiming to care for her and I'm sure she can only take so much more. She knows he wouldn't intentionally hurt her and that he has some issues he's dealing with but she can't be there for him if he won't speak, and she can't know how much he cares for her if he doesn't speak.  She can't feel content and secure if she's afraid he's going to have another nightmare and hurt her again. He needs to talk so she can understand where he is coming from and how his time in the battlefields has made him feel.  His silence is keeping them from growing closer and actually defining who they are. No matter how much each of them cares for each other they can't move forward if there is no communication. I feel sad for Justin.  He helps so many others but with this I'm sure he feels completely helpless.  Anyway, moving on to happier things like part A and part of B, I love the describing of how their bodies fit together and the intimacy they have just being together watching tv or sleeping. The little touches he gives her throughout the story...my heart melts. And go Morgan for taking control! you go girl! lol i loved that.  Ohmygosh what if she handcuffed him and he lost his dang mind in shock and pleasure!??!? can yall make that happen before its over? Lol or him her. Whatever. I just need handcuffs involved now. Lol My heart screamed for joy when he beat up Devon! Lol I was like already Freddy! Now what?! Now what?!? Lol but I know that's not the end of him and I'm afraid of what it will take to get rid of him. And what about when justin leaves?? Which he hasn't told Morgan about...listen to your dad justin! *sigh* I absolutely love this story. Please post more soon!! :o)




MochaB (Signed) on Aug 04, 2013 03:25 pm (The Office - A "Semper Fi" visual)
Whew!! *wipes sweat from brow and closes mouth* that was just...whew. Lol I'm definitely not going to say it was too much though cause i will gladly take another dose of that hotness again. I love animal Justin. Talking about handcuffs...boooooy...don't play. He would've got attacked right then. Lol anyway that was too good and I loved it. And Dales comment at the end! So funny!! Ad Morgan knows she definitely does love it. :o)



candigirl23 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2013 11:57 pm (Chapter 9 part B)
Love love this story!! Can't wait for more!!



Sharae (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2013 07:31 pm (Chapter 9 part B)
God, please dont make wait me forever for another chapter!! I am loving this story way too much..



Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2013 07:47 am (Prologue)
I knew this would happen sooner rather than later. I'm kinda glad that it happened(but wished it didn't), but this has obviously opened his eyes and now I believe that he will open up to her and understand that if he wants to keep her in his life, then he'll have express how much he needs her and Chloe in his life. I see this as the climax, as the turning point, it's make or break bc as much as Morgan cares for him, I hope she doesn't let it slide. I hope the same for Justin. I loooove this story, please update sooooon.



tiffany (Anonymous) on Jul 31, 2013 10:13 am (Chapter 9 part B)
Morgan needs to make Justin talk to her, he choked her so  they need to have a serious talk. If Justin doesn't discuss what happen to him while he was deployed then I feel that Morgan needs to leave him, because she has to think  about her and chloe's  safety.



tiffany (Anonymous) on Jul 31, 2013 10:07 am (Chapter 9 part A)
very juicy add..Morgan and Justin need to have a talk about their relationship and what is going to happen when Justin has to leave.



Tiffany (Anonymous) on Jul 08, 2013 11:09 pm (The Office - A "Semper Fi" visual)
this is my all time favorite story. I'm just waiting  for Justin to officially ask Morgan to but his girlfriend.



ToyToy82 (Signed) on Jul 04, 2013 03:30 pm (The Office - A "Semper Fi" visual)
Great visual.  I had the song "Dress On" on my mind while I was reading this chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm been a horrible Nsync/JT fan lately. Been so busy, I haven't had time to listen to any of his new songs :-( *runs, hides, waits for the all clear to come out* But, after your comment I googled the lyrics, and I can definitely see why you'd have that in mind, lol. The similarities between JT and my Marine just don't stop!





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