Comments For Girlfriend
WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Jul 31, 2012 03:25 pm (Chapter 1)
yay girl! your back!  loved it :)

Author's Response: Hi!  Yes, I've been away from writing my fiction for a bit, but I'm slowly coming back to it and hopefully I'll get some more posted at some point soon.  This one felt good and flowed well, so it made it that much easier.  Thanks so much for reviewing!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 24, 2012 07:15 pm (Chapter 1)

WHAT?! Its done?? OOh! That's right girl sing that song, I like that song.. :D Ahh..I like how Chris and Justin supported her while singing, while JC just..watched her with that thing he had next to him. Oh, he is gonna realize that he made a mistake..tee hee. But I like that Jenna looked at him first, then looked away, and didn't look back..HA! :D

This was good..nice job.. :)



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!  I liked that part too.  Just that last little kick to say, "I won't be treated this way and you have no hold on me."  



DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Jul 24, 2012 06:41 pm (Chapter 1)
Wow. Talk about a slap to the face, a dash of cold water and all that. Brilliant!

I think it would take more alcohol than that to get me up on a stage and sing..but it's great.



Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad that you liked it.  

I'm not sure that I would have gotten up there to sing either, especially to put JC in his place.  I think that Chris and Justin may have fed her a few more before the shot she took at the beginning.  LOL.



Whit1210 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2012 10:04 pm (Chapter 1)

Great way for her to spell it out for him - loved it!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!  I'm glad that you liked it.



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 23, 2012 03:28 pm (Chapter 1)
Oh my gosh! So that's it? I wanna know what JC had to say! This can't be it! This was too good!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!   JC didn't get to say anything because he was a jerk.  LOL.  No, really, it was her chance to let him know that she wasn't going to let him toy with her and it was more for Jenna than anything else.  I wanted her to be a strong character, one that wasn't going to put up with any one treating her badly, even if he is drop-dead gorgeous.  

I'm glad that you liked it!





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