theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 22, 2012 06:54 pm (Chapter 5)

Me like this line here: ;) "How creepy are we talking?" he whispered into her ear, causing her to shiver a little. She caught his eye and couldn't help but smile back at him. "Like, creepy grabbing her and whispering dirty stuff? That creepy?" Tee hee.. oh JC, and the joys of fanfic.. :D

Now, something is off about Gabe, why is si interested all of a sudden?? Hmm..sure, I said that he sounded hot, but he has me thinking otherwise..lolz

And I liked the convo b/tween Chris and Joey..

Pretty good chapter..thanks for updating.. :D




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Oct 22, 2012 01:50 am (Chapter 5)
I'm with James, Gabe seems like bad news! Thanks for the update :)





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