theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 16, 2013 08:27 pm (Chapter 11)

Ooh! "Finding Nemo"! "his name is squishy and he shall be mine." LOL sorry I had a moment.

Ahem..anyway from the top, OMG! the way Stephanie spoke to Lesly was so uncalled for! Though, I think Chris was supposed to tell Lesly already about Stephanie though, I mean, but maybe he just couldn't tell her cause of what was going on between her and everything. :( However, Lesly found out the hard way and she punched Chris's lights out..ouch.

Now, I would like to see where this goes next, will Chris head back to Orlando?? Oh but wait! This had me thinking, what if it isn't Chris's baby, and Stephanie is making all this up! OOh! This is good! Thanks for updating! :D




ruby_soho (Signed) on Jan 14, 2013 04:44 am (Chapter 11)
Drama bomb! love it. I do feel bad for Chris though : ( I look forward to the next update



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Jan 13, 2013 10:03 pm (Chapter 11)
I can't believe she socked it to him! I hope Stephanie is gone, and fast! Thanks for the great update :)



AmberW (Signed) on Jan 07, 2013 04:39 am (Chapter 10)

I'm waiting for the ball to drop between Lesley and Chris and how that mess gets cleaned up...

Great work so far! 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 06, 2013 08:52 pm (Chapter 10)

Uh huh, yeah JC, lets make up for lost time.. ;)

But onto the sad news..poor Lesly, her dad passed away, that is so awful. :( And I like that Chris was there through everything, he was just about to tell her about Stephanie and the baby, but then the phone call happened.

Sad chapter..but thanks for updating.




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Jan 02, 2013 08:18 pm (Chapter 10)
Poor Lesly :( If this is the second story in the Grayson Chronicles, whose story do we get next???  :)Thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Still thinking about the 3rd installment. I'm open to suggestions ;)

Thanks for the review!

AB 




ruby_soho (Signed) on Dec 15, 2012 02:32 pm (Chapter 1)
I love the tender moments btween chris and lesley, jc and james. some of the lines gave me butterflies. look forward to the next update



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 15, 2012 12:39 pm (Chapter 9)

Oh man.. :( I hope her dad is okay..

But on a lighter note, I hope Chris tells Lesly about Stephanie and that he's the baby daddy, before things get antsy..lolz

And I went to cloud 9 on this scene.. "JC kissed her shoulder blade, burying his face in the nape of her neck. "Mmhm. In a few minutes. Aren't you enjoying the silence? No babies crying. Nobody wandering in here uninvited. Just us, baby," *happy sigh* :)

Nicely done, thanks for the update..




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Dec 13, 2012 11:21 pm (Chapter 9)

Oh no! I hope her dad makes it! Chris is back in Grayson whoo hooo!

I am with JC and James, it is bliss when the twins are gone. Mine are 4 and keep my busy!!!

I love this series of stories :)




theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 13, 2012 07:54 pm (Chapter 8)

*snickers* This is great, this is so great. lolz Ok, ok..from the top, um finally that Lesly is realizing that Gabe is being kinda "off" with her, aww whats the matter Gabe? You don't like what she said??Well TOO BAD..HA! lolz

Now, off to JC, he's adorable, aww Sutton wants to go with him, I love the bond they share, its so cute. :) These lines here when she asked if JC and James are gonna go on any rides. "JC had to bite his lip from laughing out loud. He certainly planned on going on lots of rides with James. For hours and hours. There was a lot of lost time to make up." Oh yes of course.. ;) ahem, ride it ride it..ok let me stop..lolz like I said, great piece, thanks for the updates.




theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 13, 2012 07:43 pm (Chapter 7)

GRRR! Really Lesly?? Your friend James told you about Gabe, he's such a barnacle brain..LOL I'm glad that James told Lesly about him, but it looks like she doesn't wanna listen to her..oooh I must find out what happens next! :D

*reads next chapter*




mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Nov 12, 2012 04:56 pm (Chapter 8)

I love the drama, JC!  So glad Chris is coming back! Thanks for the update :)




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 11, 2012 11:39 pm (Chapter 8)
Oh here comes trouble. By the way who's the picture you used for James? She looks familiar.

Author's Response:

She was a swimmer for the University of Florida and unfortunately I cannot remember her name.

Thanks for reading!

AB 




ruby_soho (Signed) on Nov 11, 2012 03:53 pm (Chapter 8)
Can't wait to see what happens when Chris comes to town. Loving this story

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're liking it. It's fun thinking up what will happen next for sure ;)

 AB 




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2012 01:48 am (Chapter 6)

Gabe better not do anything to harm Sutton! Thanks for the update. Chris needs to come back to Georgia :)






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