Pumples (Signed) on Sep 14, 2014 01:37 pm (Prologue)
Wow, I feel connected to this character in just a few hundred words. It'd be great to read more of this someday. :)



creativechaos (Signed) on Nov 30, 2012 08:05 am (Prologue)
Finally getting around to leaving a review...please make this into a full story! You totally had me thinking she was the bride until that ending, now I have to know the rest of the story!



jcchasezsbabymama2005 (Signed) on Nov 28, 2012 03:59 pm (Prologue)
excellent work, keep it up, I love the twist, this is an awesome story.



Dollface (Signed) on Nov 27, 2012 08:54 pm (Prologue)
Oh my word! I really hope that you turn this into a longer story. I am dying to know what happens and to know the back story!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 25, 2012 09:35 pm (Prologue)
That twist! Please write more, I need backstory!!! 



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Nov 25, 2012 08:14 pm (Prologue)
Wow, that was intense! I can't believe he is marrying another woman and we don't even have all the story yet! Poor Leah! I loved it :)



Whit1210 (Signed) on Nov 25, 2012 06:13 pm (Prologue)
Love Love LOVE this!  Cannot wait to read more and so excited to have you posting stories on here!



theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 25, 2012 02:37 pm (Prologue)
*sobs* Oooh! I must know what happens next, not a bad start. I'm looking forward for the next update. :) Nicely done..



DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Nov 25, 2012 02:29 pm (Prologue)
I was so caught up in it and then I get to the end and had to stop and swallow the lump in my throat. You. MUST. WRITE. MORE!!!!!! Wonderful job!





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