Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Jul 27, 2014 12:25 pm (Chapter 2)
So hilarious and endearing. You did a great job with the dialogue and the relationship between the guys is very tangible. Keep it up, mate!



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 20, 2012 07:32 pm (Chapter 2)

LOL This chapter has me laughing! Oh my goodness..I like how Chris randomly comes out of nowhere, these lines here: "Not coming; she was going dress shopping with her mom and girlfriends and basically kicked me out of the house. They were turning it into a big girls only weekend and for the sake of my sanity, I escaped.” LMAO

And then Lance pulls up, these lines: “Chris – you piece of crap!” Lance yelled as he slung his duffel bag over his shoulder. “You were supposed to pick me up, remember? My flight got in 20 minutes after yours and you were going to be my ride up here!”  ROFL

I am loving these "brotherly" moments.. awws. :) 






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