Comments For The Christmas Gift
Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 15, 2013 11:36 pm (Chapter 3)

Since you were so nice to review my story, I figured I'd return the favor. This was a very sweet, endearing tale and I'm so happy that Chris is the primary focus. That man seriously deserves more love; between you and me, I feel if any of the guys should have put out more solo work, it should have been him. 

Anyway, you write beautifully and the pacing is nice and smooth. You did a fantastic job with the friendship; the reunion at the meet and greet was solid gold. Why do I get the feeling that this relationship may very well extend beyond the boundaries of friendship? 




Lew (Signed) on Jan 01, 2013 08:20 am (Chapter 1)
Very nice job - I'm so glad they met again!



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Dec 30, 2012 03:36 pm (Chapter 3)
Aww cute. I liked how chris truly cared for jenna and how she stayed true to her word.



PopDiva (Signed) on Dec 29, 2012 12:19 am (Chapter 3)
Love, love, loved it!  Thank you so much!  I really liked the friendship that Chris and Jenna had and that it carried through to their adulthood, even though they had lost touch.  
Loved the surprise kiss :)  It's always fun when it's a surprise to both of them.

Author's Response: I am thrilled you liked it!! I was so nervous writing it for you. And I thought it was awesome we got each other for a Secret Santa. :)



acciolovesong (Signed) on Dec 26, 2012 09:25 pm (Chapter 2)
Dawww so sad and cute at the same time. I liked it when you sent it to me via email and I like it now :) Did notice one typo, though. "That people think less of us" instead of thing. If only Word had a meaning check :P 

Author's Response: I read over it and missed that one. Thanks for reading and I am so glad you liked it. :)



ruby_soho (Signed) on Dec 26, 2012 03:39 pm (Chapter 1)
That was really lovely. Well done : )



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 09:30 pm (Chapter 3)

OMG! What an amazing story! This had me bawling seriously..I can totally feel that warm and fuzzy Christmas feeling! *tear *sigh.

 I'm so happy that they found eachother after all these years, well Jenna found him, thanks to her brother, that scored her the ticket..WOOT!

And these lines here, telling him what he wanted for Christmas:

Yes, I have it,” Chris told her, chuckling. “And I have what I wanted this year. I don't need anything else.” His eyes studied her and he winked at her. “You still want me to sing to you?”

Jenna nodded. “That was all I wanted that year too. The Christmas gift I wanted was just to hear you sing.”

AWW! Like I said, great job! :D Lovely piece..
 



Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews! I am so glad you read and enjoyed the story. My Chris muse just jumped after I got going. He was fun to write and the story just flowed: after wrestlingwith it for quite a while.



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 09:18 pm (Chapter 2)

*tear  This chapter had me all teary, she's moving now?? To Chicago?? :( But maybe its for the best?? I sure hope so..

I liked there outing, that was really sweet and cute. I liked how Chris sang "The First Noel." :D Ahh! And she kissed him, and then he kissed her..AWW!

And I like the exchanging gifts part as well.. :)

*reads next chapter*




theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 09:04 pm (Chapter 1)

Yay! A Chris story! We need more Chris stories, I like the fact that you went back to the beginning of how we was, and I like that his best friend Jenna is always there for him. Though, the fact that the kids in the school were teasing both of them, that is not right. :(

Now, would like to see where this goes, so *reads next chapter*




Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 08:34 pm (Chapter 3)
That was such a sweet story - awesome job, lady!



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 02:51 pm (Chapter 1)
That was really cute and well written. Glad you worked it all out!



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 10:51 am (Chapter 3)
That was awesome in so many ways! I loved the first kiss scene and their bond. Amazing story. I also really liked the black and white banner at the beginning. Thanks for a great Chris story :)

Author's Response: Thanks :D I caught a few of my typos, but over all I loved the story





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