Lew (Signed) on Jan 01, 2013 08:10 am (Chapter 1)
Wow...nicely done.  JC would make the perfect star of Fifty Shades.

Author's Response: Thank you!



jcchasezsbabymama2005 (Signed) on Dec 31, 2012 11:59 am (Chapter 1)
great job, I have read the 50 Shades books and I would love to see JC as Christian, this was hot and smoking

Author's Response: Thank you!



ruby_soho (Signed) on Dec 26, 2012 02:11 pm (Chapter 1)
wow..... need a ciggie after that. good job

Author's Response: Thank you!



kb4jc (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 09:43 am (Chapter 1)
for someone who didn't read 50 yet...that was pretty dam hot!!! love it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! I hope you had a merry holiday and have a great 2013!



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 11:01 pm (Chapter 1)
JC should play Christian Grey in the  movie!!! Well done, thanks for the hot read!

Author's Response: thank you!



theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 10:17 pm (Chapter 1)

*jawdrops* Wow..that was something. Ok..I have never read 50 shades of gray, but this was..certainly mindblowing. OMG! This reminded me of this one epi from CSI, it was the dominatrix or Lady Heather something..random I know.

This was an interesting story though... :P



Author's Response:

Thank you!

It was quite interesting to write. A new twist on the old sex scene :)

Lady Heather! I miss her. I miss the old CSI. Now I need to go find some to watch LOL.




Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 08:31 pm (Chapter 1)
Wow, that was really hot!  Great job, lady! 

Author's Response: Thank you!



Schizo19 (Anonymous) on Dec 21, 2012 06:05 pm (Chapter 1)
um, yum. <3

Author's Response: thank you! <3





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