Whit1210 (Signed) on Dec 29, 2012 01:50 pm (Chapter 3)
Love love loved it!  Great job, lady! 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Happy New Year!

AB 



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Dec 29, 2012 12:43 pm (Chapter 3)

You captured my vision almost perfectly! This was great. I like how you portrayed Justin and Justin around Marli, like he's completely different people. I really like portrayals of Justin being an asshole and you hit this on the head. The whole thing was written beautifully, I especially loved Marli's narration voice. And the ending was great, especially the last line.

All in all I loved this story so much. Thank you and I hope the rest of your holidays are wonderful.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write!

Happy New Year!

AB 



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Dec 29, 2012 01:14 am (Chapter 3)
Great story, I loved her thoughts! I have always enjoyed your stories. Thanks for this one too!

Author's Response:

Thanks, MollyAnna! Happy New Year!

AB 



DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Dec 28, 2012 09:47 am (Chapter 3)
Wow..I loved this! Very nicely done!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed :) Thanks!

AB 





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