theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 01, 2013 07:17 pm (Chapter 2: A Change of Plans)

Very good JC, you deserve a gold star for making grilled cheese..LOL

Well, I like that Parker understands that his mom and baby sister are more important than the snow in MD. And he reminds of Charlie from the Santa Clause movie, with his wisdom and things.

This is getting good, would like to read the next chapter.. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, I can just picture JC clumsily making a grilled cheese in the kitchen!






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