Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 09:50 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)
I hope that they can get it together before they fall apart again. They belong together. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 03:52 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)

Yeah..we would see what happens..hmm..

Now, earlier in this chapter, these lines here: "And then there was the sex, which to Becca was always mind-blowing. He definitely knew how to make love to her and please her and he was methodical about it until he knew she was ready to come. She had never experienced anything better than being with Josh like that. It was almost surreal. Mindblowing it is, oh yes..especially if its with a guy like JC..woww! Ok let me stop, lolz

I love how you write every detail in this chapter, I'm enjoying this story..thanks for the update.. :D




spoon (Anonymous) on Jul 19, 2013 05:48 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)
Things were looking so good and now it's all going pear shaped again *sigh* Hope they figure it out.

Author's Response:

They're quite stubborn ;)

AB 






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