Not overly sappy or preachy. Their immediate closeness warms my heart. I know it's just fan fiction but your portrayal of Joey makes me love him more lol
Great job, once again!
Author's Response: That's good! :D Then my time and work has been worthwhile.
Author's Response: I'm a deeply spiritual person, so I like to weave in spiritual elements wherever I can. And I've always been a sucker for emotional stuff, too; too many of us act like it's a crime to display our true feelings, to cry, to admit that we can't make it on our own.
She is going home right?? She's not gonna "go" like in..you know..not yet! :( I hope not, not yet.
I liked how Joey and Sheri had their small talk in the room, and he managed to get into her room, and its sad that her friends are so far away from her though.
I hope JC and the guys would realize what a nice girl she is before its too late and they would feel guilty for the rest of their lives.
Author's Response: I got a bit emotional writing this, believe it or not. In some ways, I can totally relate to Sheri.