Comments For Fading Sun
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 03, 2014 04:32 am (Chapter 15: Temporary Truce)
Love Lance and his white flag. As for the others, their reaction to Sheri surprised me. Hope they get it together soon.

Author's Response:

Obviously Lance didn't have a flag, so he had to make do with what he did have!

Unfortunately, this is how a lot of people in the real world react. Doesn't justify their behavior, of course, but you can't fault them too much, either. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 12, 2013 10:18 pm (Chapter 15: Temporary Truce)

Awww.. :( That is so heartbreaking, I'm sorry you had to go through that with your mom, I'm glad that everything was able to be solved.

Now on to the chapter, Joey likes her, he's crushing on her, thats so cute.. :)

These lines here: “You know how most of the time, he’s the one to dish out orders. But the way you stood up to him…” Lance shook his head, his handsome visage giving off hints of admiration and amusement. “I never saw anything like it. For once, he got a taste of his own medicine—and you did it in five minutes flat.”

Thats right! I bet you JC wasn't expecting that at all..

This is a good chapter, thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Yes, Joey likes her, but I mentioned earlier that this will not be a romantic story. As for JC, I'm sure he isn't that bossy, but that's the fun of fan fiction; you can make anything happen.




Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Aug 12, 2013 01:40 pm (Chapter 15: Temporary Truce)

Awesome. Love this story!! Love the way you write and are so expressive with the character's emotions.

Alysen B. 



Author's Response: Thank you. This is what I love to write, and I've had loads of practice. A few writing classes didn't hurt, either.





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