Comments For Fading Sun
theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 09, 2014 09:52 pm (Chapter 27: Amends)

There's gonna be a sequel?? :D Ooh!

Ok, from the top, I'm SO glad that Joey and Chris are friends again..I actually felt when Chris poured his heart out to Joey on how he really felt about Joey having cancer..the moment when they both hugged and cried together got to me.. *tear

And also like the moment where Justin and Joey were reconsidering their friendship in the kitchen as well.. :)

But I remember THIS phrase from Titanic: the priest was saying it when everyone was sliding down, “And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away.”  of course he said it much differently, he said "former world" or something...

Great chapter though, I enjoyed it.. :) Thanks for the updates..



Author's Response:

Yeppers! Don't know how long or elaborate it will be, but I see potential for at least one more story in this area. I've already got the title and cover page, but I'm going to wait until this story's completely done. 

Told you the guys' behavior would make more sense later on, and in good time, you will know JC's reasons, too. Goes to show that people care so much more than they admit, and it's so easy to develop a tragic misunderstanding. 

I was never crazy about Titanic. It's not a bad movie, but it's just not for me. I will listen to the soundtrack, but I don't care to watch the film. 




AceofSpades (Signed) on Sep 09, 2014 06:17 pm (Chapter 27: Amends)
Awww, Chris! That almost made me cry. But, I loved it. This whole chapter was great. I'm so glad Joey was able to forgive them and let them back into his life. This was so sweet, I was smiling the whole time.

Author's Response: If it were any sweeter, your head would explode into cotton candy.





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