Comments For Fading Sun
theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 27, 2015 10:08 pm (Chapter 30: Out of Sync)

These lines here: made me spit out the popcorn I was eating:

“JC, it’s Chris,” Chris broke in, which told Joey that Chris had snatched the phone from Lance’s hand. “Here’s a bright idea for you. Why don’t you make like a Thanksgiving turkey and stuff it? If you’re just going to talk crap about Sheri, then shut your mouth; otherwise, I’ll shut it for you. ROFL!

And what is up with JC?? I MUST know! So I need to read the next chapter to find out!

And is Sheri's time coming now?? So soon?? :(  



Author's Response:

Trying to add a little humor wherever necessary. Hope you didn't make too much of a mess!

I just posted the chapter explaining JC's behavior, so I'll let that do the talking. And if you remember, Sheri told Joey she didn't have long to live anyway: "Maybe three months. Four if I'm lucky." That's why Joey's so bound and determined to help her finish her bucket list. Because it will be over, all too soon.




AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jul 23, 2015 08:25 am (Chapter 30: Out of Sync)

Despite what you're going through, I'm glad to hear that this story is helping you and that you find it therapeutic.

But, I feel so bad for Joey. JC I feel is just angry because he's worried, but Joey's sudden realization at how quickly time has passed was a great way to end this chapter.

Update when you can. I'm excited to see where it goes from here.



Author's Response:

It sure is. Writing's helped me through other slumps before, and so has art. It's also good to watch *NSYNC clips and reminisce about the old days. Those clips also help pump out the creative juices for this story.






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