theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 11:48 am (Chapter 3)

"I’d seen him interact with fans on television – Johnny made us all watch fan interaction videos to get the hang of what could potentially happen – and he was so sweet to them. He was a pro and the JC I had watched weeks ago on those videos was not the JC I was with then.

Yeah..he has that seductive side to him, that freaky deaky side.. *grins*

*reads next chapter*




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 29, 2013 01:49 pm (Chapter 3)

Oh boy. This is like watching a train wreck; You know it's about to happen, yet you can't look away. Addie, she's so naive, and JC's too controlling. This is the formula for an abusive relationship, whether it be verbal or physical. I think that JC's in lust and not in love. He likes the fact that Addie's innocent and naive, because he can take advantage of that. And I just want to scream every time they have sex, I mean I know Addie's been pretty much sheltered, but it's like damn girl, you're 19, haven't you ever heard of "No glove, no love"? Ugh!

Anyway, great writing, can't wait to read your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Right?! The sad thing is, I based Addie off of a girl I went to undergrad with. Her parents had homeschooled her in a remote little town and she went crazy wild in college and thought it wasn't a big deal...It drove me crazy!!!

 Glad you're enjoying it ;)

Alysen B. 






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