theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 12:19 pm (Chapter 4)

Well, Addie..you should know when you too much is too much, you weren't listening to your conscience Jiminy Cricket huh?? lolz But looks like she was having wayyyy too much fun, and not just her, but the others too, but I at least they were responsible of it.

And JC is being too, whats the word?? Controlling is one of them, and lusty very lusty..all he wants is to get into her pants and lets get on with it everytime he sees her?? No no no..



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 10:31 pm (Chapter 4)
urgh JC is an ass!  I hope he gets a wake up call soon! It's interesting to read JC written this way, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I know, it's tough to write him like this, but all in the name of fiction ;)

Alysen B. 



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2013 08:49 pm (Chapter 4)
I have been in this type of relationship. Trust me you become stupid because you think everything's ok when in reality it's not. I hope he gets a kick in the nuts.

Author's Response:

Don't worry....it's coming ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 30, 2013 07:51 pm (Chapter 4)
Okay. I really did not like JC's response. God, I hope Addie does not get pregnant, I hope a pregnancy scare will scare her straight. And you're right, I definitely do want to slap her right now, and do a whole lot more to JC. That bastard. 

Author's Response:

It's sooo difficult writing him this way, but it's also stretched my creativity as well. Don't worry, there will be more with James and JC coming up in the Grayson Series and you won't want to kick his butt ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 





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