Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 10:18 pm (Chapter 10)
I think Lance and Addie are adorable together but is it bad that I cannot picture Lance being straight? Lol. And seriously Johnny...wtf? I have a bad feeling about this whole JC wants to see you thing. Good update :)

Author's Response:

I remind myself every time I write him straight here that it's fiction. Trust me, I debated for a while, but for me, it just fits in this story ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 08, 2013 07:16 pm (Chapter 10)

Ok I have no idea why the heck I am beginning to feel a soft spot for JC, even though he practically made Addie miserable, curse you JC for being so, so, what's the word?? I don't know, can't think of anything for him, hmm..maybe sappy is a good word..lolz

Now, I like the playful banter scene between Lance and Addie in the bathroom, these lines here: “At least let me get this for you,” he put the washcloth between my legs and began to massage me. I couldn’t stop him. It felt too good, so I let him continue and soon he was the one on his knees. :P

I also like that Addie is choreographing "Three4One" now, and Kaitlyn is clueless since she's new..lolz

Above all, great chapter, looking forward for more, thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Hey congrats on your award!!!

Alysen 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 08, 2013 07:12 pm (Chapter 10)
Lance is right. Lance is right! Addie please listen to Lance and go to Mississippi. Ugh, I cannot believe that Johnny did that. JC needs to be stopped. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, Ashley!

Alysen  





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