Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Oct 02, 2013 06:40 pm (Chapter 12)
I really feel bad for Addie I really hope that things eventually get better for her. I have a feeling that everything will eventually work itself out, though. 

Author's Response: Addie's slowly learning, that's for sure. Glad you liked it and thanks for your review :)
Alysen B.



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 20, 2013 09:28 pm (Chapter 11)

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! How scary that he just showed up! But he didn't harm her..he just wanted to touch her belly.. *sigh* BUT..super Lance came to the rescue, poor Addie, I think this little break to Mississippi would do her good..for a little while, I honestly would be crushed if I had to leave my homestate and leave my family and friends, but if the guy is psycho, then its for a good reason to leave..until things cool off.

Great job! Thanks for updating! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Stay tuned ;)

alysen b. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 20, 2013 06:53 pm (Chapter 11)
Oh God I was so scared for Addie! I was like how does she always end up alone in these situations? Good thing Lance had come home before JC could hurt her. So glad that she's decided to move to Mississippi. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Ashley!

Alysen B. 




Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 08, 2013 10:18 pm (Chapter 10)
I think Lance and Addie are adorable together but is it bad that I cannot picture Lance being straight? Lol. And seriously Johnny...wtf? I have a bad feeling about this whole JC wants to see you thing. Good update :)

Author's Response:

I remind myself every time I write him straight here that it's fiction. Trust me, I debated for a while, but for me, it just fits in this story ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 08, 2013 07:16 pm (Chapter 10)

Ok I have no idea why the heck I am beginning to feel a soft spot for JC, even though he practically made Addie miserable, curse you JC for being so, so, what's the word?? I don't know, can't think of anything for him, hmm..maybe sappy is a good word..lolz

Now, I like the playful banter scene between Lance and Addie in the bathroom, these lines here: “At least let me get this for you,” he put the washcloth between my legs and began to massage me. I couldn’t stop him. It felt too good, so I let him continue and soon he was the one on his knees. :P

I also like that Addie is choreographing "Three4One" now, and Kaitlyn is clueless since she's new..lolz

Above all, great chapter, looking forward for more, thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Hey congrats on your award!!!

Alysen 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 08, 2013 07:12 pm (Chapter 10)
Lance is right. Lance is right! Addie please listen to Lance and go to Mississippi. Ugh, I cannot believe that Johnny did that. JC needs to be stopped. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, Ashley!

Alysen  




Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 29, 2013 12:57 am (Chapter 9)
Wow. Holy crap that was not at all the chapter that I was expecting. Glad JC finally got what was coming to him! Can't wait to read the next update :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 28, 2013 11:07 pm (Chapter 9)

*GASP* Oh wow..WOW! JC admitted everything, and everyone knows, good he's in prison, (can't believe I'm saying this) But I am SO GLAD HE'S THERE!

This chapter frightened me, :( the way you write in descriptive detail is incredible though.

She had such a wonderful evening with Lance and JC ruined it..Ruined it completely.

So is she gonna continue to have the baby?? And maybe Lance would adopt it?? That would be nice..

Good job though on this chapter..thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

As always, your feedback is so appreciated!

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 28, 2013 06:25 pm (Chapter 9)
Whoa. I hate whenever Addie's alone because the worst always happens. I'm at least glad that everyone knows now, so that it won't happen again. Now that her parents are coming into the picture, hopefully everything will work out for the best.

Author's Response:

We'll see.......... ;)

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 22, 2013 07:29 pm (Chapter 8)
I'm so glad that Addie finally started standing up to JC, ad that she's starting to grow a backbone. Can't wait to read more! 

Author's Response:

Thanks, girl! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 22, 2013 01:54 pm (Chapter 8)

Wow oh wow...I'm SO happy that Addie and her friends were there to back her up...and kudos for Chris for being there as well..and I love the fact that Addie is getting the chops to talk back to JC...YEAH :D

Good job on this chapter, looking forward to read more.. Thanks for the updates..



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 22, 2013 01:09 pm (Chapter 7)

I'm scared.. :( But thanks for the warning..

Addie you have to tell someone, I mean Lance knows, but I think you have to tell someone now about all of this..

It was really nice that Addie and Lance shared their moment, go with Lance, he's safe..

I gotta remember this is fiction, not real, but I know that probably alot of relationships go through this, such a sad and scary thing..

*reads next chapter*




Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 21, 2013 08:08 pm (Chapter 8)
Woohoo! Way to go Addie and finally standing up to JC and not taking his shit anymore!! Although I feel with JC being such an evil bastard, he might attempt something when Addie is alone again. Good update :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Alysen B. 




Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 20, 2013 12:24 pm (Chapter 7)

Ok, I've been reading this story from the beginning and can't hold back any longer! What the fuck is wrong with JC? Holy crap dude! Addie I can understand because being in that type of relationship is brain washing and you feel as though your trapped and no one will understand. What a chapter, very very well written!!

On a side note completely unrelated......anyone else aware that *Nsync will be reuniting at the VMAs on Sunday?? OMG OMG OMG!!! :)



Author's Response:

Megan, I actually squealed like a teenager when I heard the news!!!

 Thanks for the feedback :) It was hard to write for sure, esp because I adore JC!

Keep reading!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 19, 2013 06:47 pm (Chapter 7)
Okay, wow. This was just... Wow. I don't even know what to say to be quite honest. This was a very tough chapter. Amazing writing by the way. Consider me blown away. Nice update!

Author's Response:

Extremely tough to write, but thanks, girl. 

Alysen B. 






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