alee_92 (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2014 10:29 am (
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OMG!!! About damn time they kissed! Lol I agree with Jessica is trying to mark her territory, but he's feeling Mel a little bit more. The way he wrapped his arms around her bc she was cold was soooooo cute. It's the little things. Damn you Rachel, butt out! Can't wait for the next update!
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Oct 17, 2014 09:05 pm (
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I literaaly squealed when i saw an upadate. Oh boy Jessica is here . I knew she would eventually show up. I wander if Rachel been telling her about how close Mel and Jsutin have become. She was really all up in Mel business and hanging all on Justin like she marking territory. This is going to be interesting. Mel noticed that although Jessica is all into Justin but he dosen't seem to feel the same. As for Rachel once again she messes up the flow. i wander if she saw or found out about Mel going to the studio with Justin.
well look forward to more soon.
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 08, 2014 08:34 pm (
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Agsbdgsmsnsksmshrndh!!!!! Ok so I love that that just happened. Lol even though it may not have been the best timing, I can't help but love it cause I've been waiting on that first kiss. Unfortunately Jessica is still in the picture. And since Justin can't grow a pair and either cut ties or actually commit to her she is being dragged along the way, and IN the way of him developing something with Melanie. I mean he needs to make a decision. Certainly inviting her to Barbados wasn't the smartest idea. Although Melanie is still in a fragile state she, and she's having these strange feelings and relations to Justin, she definitely likes him as more than friends (or is close to that line) even though she hasn't admitted that to herself. And if anything he needs to make a decision so he won't hurt her more than she's been hurt. He obviously cares for her in just this short oeriod of time. Not saying they need to jump in a relationship together immediately, but with Jessica cut out they could definitely be on their way to one. It's great that theyhave become friends over this time, but there's still so much to learn about each other and they could do that freely in he was completely unattached. I'm so glad she confided in him with the info about her ex-husband. Huge step. Anyway I still can't stand Rachel, Justin needs to make a decision, and I'm so glad they kissed. Even if it was bad timing. Lol but I certainly hope this doesn't make Mel react crazily. Hope they can both deal with it rationally and not take steps back from the relationship they have going. Update soon!! :o)
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jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Oct 08, 2014 11:38 am (
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Things were getting exciting until Rachel called. She sure has lousy timing. I'm glad Melanie is so observant. She caught on to Trace and Rachel. I love how generous Justin his to his employees.
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Classicbeauty (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2014 11:05 pm (
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I'm so so so loving this story. I just started reading it. But keep up the good work,I can't wait to see what happens next. Also what happen to the other story you had with the girl in ATL, kind of a call girl I think. Either way I'm disappointed to see its gone wish you kept it up but I'm excited with this new one.
Thanks for sharing your talent !
Take care,
dani
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Nikki (Anonymous) on Oct 04, 2014 01:07 pm (
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AWEEEESOME. Now things aredefinitely picking up and getting quite interesting. I'm awaiting the next chapter...soon, please:)
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