elle-miranda (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2015 12:46 pm (
Chapter 16 - Below The Belt)
and at this moment, I hate them both.
elle-miranda (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2015 12:26 pm (
Chapter 14 - I Know Your Secret)
reading on my phone (from which I hate commenting) but at this point, Addy is making me want to slap her. I hope Mel tells Lance the truth...even though I doubt she will.
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 09, 2014 08:10 pm (
Epilogue - Take Back The Night)
After reading this, I'm mad they didn't do a video intro like that at the VMAs. Totally badass sounding. Reminded me of the "punk" beginning of the PopOdyssey tour in a way, don't ask why. Also makes me wish even more than I already do for a real reunion but we wont get into that rant here ;) Excited to read the next in the series so that's what I'm gonna do, bye.
AceOfSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 09, 2014 07:27 pm (
Epilogue - Take Back The Night)
Loved the inclusion of the VMAs. Great ending. Liam Aiden. Great name
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 08, 2014 07:48 pm (
Chapter 37 - Bleed For Me (Part Two))
Such a good chapter!!! Thanks for updating so quick. Now I'm ready for Liam to make his appearance.!!!!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 08, 2014 07:03 pm (
Chapter 37 - Bleed For Me (Part Two))
“I just don't want him to have what was supposed to be mine."
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I think that line summed everything up perfectly. Marc, Marc, Marc, true love prevails all the time.Mackenzie was so sassy in this chapter. Loved it.
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 07, 2014 09:00 pm (
Chapter 36 - Bleed For Me (Part One))
See you can't do this to us!!! I don't like cliff hangers. I need the other chapter!!!! I really don't think I can put this into words how much I am loving this story. I heart about stopped at the end where it seems like Marc is putting distance between Lance and Addy. I dont like them being seperated. Please please update soon. Pretty please with sugar on top
AceofSpades (Signed) on Mar 07, 2014 08:25 pm (
Chapter 36 - Bleed For Me (Part One))
Loved seeing the scene with Lance's parents a second time. Like I said earlier, I feel like Addy's been pregnant for a year. haha.
Well, of course he's still going to want her, Marc.
You're doing a great job with showing his sadistic behavior in regards to how he toys with them with the gun and how it wasn't loaded.
I also like how you're showing his relationsihp with Mackenzie as well. I had a feeling he just wanted to get rid of the baby, but him wanting to amp it up to killing them is great, too.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Feb 26, 2014 09:36 pm (
Chapter 34 - Control)
I hope my semi truck load of tissues is on the way. I need them. I LOVED it! And yes, the house will be toasty warm with Justin as insulation.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Feb 20, 2014 08:51 pm (
Chapter 32 - Just Got Wicked)
I don't know how Mel could sleep through that. I'd wake up the minute I coudl sense someone was there. Great ending
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Feb 19, 2014 08:34 pm (
Chapter 31 - Monster)
Overstuffed enchilada, haha. I had a feeling Mackenzie would show up around them sooner or later. Marc is messed up, but it's entertainingly written
AceofSpades (Signed) on Feb 18, 2014 09:52 am (
Chapter 30 - Last Resort)
I had a feeling Marc would end up doing something like that. Can't wait for more.
AceofSpades (Signed) on Feb 12, 2014 11:52 am (
Chapter 29 - Only Human)
It was just two sentences you needed. BUT, I loved that whole conversation, it was really heartfelt and deep and I liked that Addie is opening up to Lance about her past and trying to comfort him at the same time.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Feb 10, 2014 08:20 pm (
Chapter 28 - Invisible Man)
Nice ending. I'm liking what you're doing with Marc in this.
AceofSpades (Signed) on Feb 08, 2014 08:01 pm (
Chapter 26 - Headstrong)
Loved how Chris held the umbrella as if it was a bat and I liked seeing the radio show bit again. Liike I said earlier, you realistically showed how things can get off topic really easily.
Update soon.
